Reviews for What's wrong with Harry?
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 9 . 10/6/2011
Brilliant story. Glad I read it.
PrussianTails chapter 3 . 10/6/2011
I really like the story, but just a little critique? Watch your tense. Like:

"You was out there." correct to "You were out there." It's just a small thing that interrupts the flow, and takes you away from the story. Also, pronouns. Instead of insistently using their names, you can throw in a "he" or "the blonde" or "the brunette" or any adjective you think describes them in the moment or physically. It gets a little tiring rereading names, and I know it's hard to keep "he" straight with two guys, but sometimes names being repeated can make it more confusing by disrupting the flow.
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
hahah nice i liked
Cathcer1984 chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
Lovely way to end :)
Cathcer1984 chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
Naughty Ron!
Pri-Chan 1410 chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
It was a great fic!

Twilightfans chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
Brilliant ending! I loved this story!
Canadian-23 chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
Hey amazing! :)

Great final chapter! Love it! It's was a really nice story! :) I can't wait to see more of your work and again wonderful story! You are amazing! :) :)
marksmom chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
Great little story! I really enjoyed the fluff! Looking forward to your next one...Kudos!
marksmom chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
At least Ron left before he got an eyeful! Great chapter! Kudos!
A Smouldering Soul chapter 9 . 10/5/2011
Great story :)
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
Ron, shouldn't have followed them, bad Ron. Great chapter though. I am so loving this story even if Draco is not the one who tops cause that is what I prefer but this is awesome. Can't wait for more.
Serpent91 chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
well done
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
oh wow that awwww i love nice justnice
Pri-Chan 1410 chapter 8 . 10/5/2011
Love it!
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