|Reviews for The Babel Incident|
| Shane Ward chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I didn't think I would go back to checking this Anime after I finished my story, but its nice to see what fellow writers are up to in this fandom.
I must admit your introduction of the story was stunning and also the descriptions of worlds too, I did find that you jumped into the dialog and did not continue with the lovely detail, I think if you add that level of detail to the dialog to, or around it in other words, this story would be a classic.
Since this is your first story you deserve high credit, when I first started, my tale was terrible...
Keep up the good work and we might have a professional writer someday.
| Anito Works chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
1 word: EPIC!
The plot is perfect and well deserving of praise. Words are well constructed but still has place for improvements. Dialogues are completely inline with the characters. Everything is in occurdance with the anime.
| Anito Works chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
This is an awesome story. How come im the first one to review it?