Reviews for The night's so blue
dinabar chapter 4 . 9/20/2011
BIG SMILE

thanks for writing, I really enjoyed this one.

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dinabar chapter 3 . 9/20/2011
Oh another piece of magic, that almost fight was terrific! And Harry's inner ramblings. Spot on.

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dinabar chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
This is brilliant I love it, especially the lines: 'She's angry...what did you do?' And the bit about the full stops. Magic.

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Charlotte88 chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS!

Seriously, how is English not your first language? You really can't tell at all; you write a lot better than many people I know!

Back to the story: It's wonderful! You have their banter spot-on and I can actually picture it all happening. Truly beautiful writing. More soon I hope! :)

Charlotte

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tigpop chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
I LOVE YOU! Just say it Harry, she was asking you to say it!

Ok, sorry, think I got a little to caught up in that chapter. It was so perfect :) apart from silly Harry not telling her :p

The whole shooting stars, cuddling, deck chairs thing is just beyond cute!

*Sigh* can I stay in this little universe forever? :)

Are you sure English isn't your first language? Haha. It's amazing :D

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tigpop chapter 3 . 9/19/2011
:D I really do love your writing! All the astrology bit at the beginning, and the thoughts of Harry :)

"Does "ah" mean that you can positively affirm that there will be ice-cream?" - and that bit too :D hehe

Oh Harry and his little ideas :) love it :)

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hopelesslyhalfhearted chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
i love this! it's so perfectly in character - all their conversations are spot on. continue!
tigpop chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
I love your writing :D and how it's from Harry's POV :)

The 'unsuitable' conversation was brilliant :)

:D

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Audrey1119 chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
"You should be flattered. I could have bought the ones with a four on it." But of course he'd say that...

"You just hope she doesn't..." of course she does!

I love this so much, especially this chapter, it brings such a fluffy, heart melting images to my brain :)
tigpop chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
I love this already!

I don't think Harry will ever truely understand 'Nikkiverse' :D haha.

And the last bit made me smile, lots :D

Off to read the next bit :)

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Audrey1119 chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
Chapter 2&3, this conversation that is almost breaking into a fight and than ice-cream part turning it to witty Harry-Nikkiness... Adorable and so "them".

"Make that half a strip of chewing gum." ROFL I can literally hear him say that! I can completely imagine this whole situation actually.

Also very in character for Nikki to have problems in private and personal life at the same time.

I like the bit about the case, it could be a start of a whole new fic...
Audrey1119 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
THANK YOU! :)

"Does it mean "please ask again..." loved this part. Such a "manly" way of thinking, also so Harry.

"A little idea you rather start to like." And we are all fans of little ideas XD

Once again, I really love your writing style and how easily it makes for reader to see, hear, smell, feel situation ;-)