Reviews for Banking on Her |
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Sabrina chapter 18 . 11/11 I reread all of your Harry and Hermione stories all of the time Thank you for sharing your gift I look forward to more stories You are one of the best writers on fanfiction in my opinion |
Shinobi Gatana chapter 18 . 11/10 Perfection. |
allisonwellingtonbrown chapter 3 . 11/1 unlike some of the reviews I like this idea. it's more realistic even. a teenager is going to crumble before they become aggressive. we as humans don't generally fight back unless backed into a corner. |
Guest chapter 18 . 9/5 For a dark o-make. With how badly Albus, Minerva, and Severus treat Harry and Hermione; it is a good thing that your Sirius is a calmer/saner version. Just imagine a crazier Sirius eliminating the reason his godson is willing to give up his magic. He know how to break into Hogwarts. A deadly prank/trap for Snape; wait for Dumbles to leave his office and takes him out with a cursed dagger; finally wait in the shadows Minerva to show-up. May-be is Ben kill hims of to emancipate Harry once they r dead. That could be a scary story. Just thinking about Sirius sitting in that cave thinking about how to fix his godson’s problems for him. |
bashfyl chapter 18 . 9/6 Thanks for sharing. 3 |
deadsnakebiting chapter 10 . 9/4 Hi Robert, I am re-reading your stories again for the 6th or 7th time, I really enjoy the variety of the plots from one to the next, you have such a great imagination! Anyway, I understand why you have messaging turned off but I miss not being able to just send a note to you on occasion. I hope you get to read this and that all is well and that your life and family are doing fine. Best of luck in the future and as always, keep up the great work you do, John |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/1 WHAT THE HECK IS THIS! YOU ARE WRONGING PROFFESSOR DUMBLEDORE. 1000000000000000000000000000 DISLIKES! |
RoBrCh chapter 11 . 8/15 Couldn't find the note about your losses in your profile so don't know how long ago that occurred. Regardless, the pain of the losses becomes part of who you are. Please accept my condolences and know that I am praying for you, and all who grieve those losses. |
Ultach chapter 9 . 8/8 Quote: "Dobby had outdid himself,..." NO! As in HELL NO! "DOBBY OUTDID HIMSELF..." would be okay. "DOBBY HAD OUTDONE HIMSELF,..." would also be okay. "Had outdid"... Hell no! Just track down and execute whoever supposedly taught you English grammar. Major crimes against grammar. As I often chastise a buddy of mine, your major error is throwing in HAD or HAVE where it does not belong. STOP THAT. Ciao. PS. Otherwise, a decent, moderately erudite, tale. |
hdres chapter 18 . 7/26 A well written and interesting story. I enjoyed how Harry and Hermione worked out how to solve each problem. Thank you for sharing your story |
C Dumbledore chapter 11 . 7/16 And, thank you for writing! This is my second or third time through your stories and I'm loving them as much as I did the first time. Just got sucked in by Won the Battle Lost the War appearing and now I'm apparently reading everything again. Thanks... And, BTW, while I'm a fan of your writing, my favorite story title EVER is Who Will Fill a Coward's Grave. O on that one. |
WhyTK chapter 18 . 6/22 All of your Harmony stories are great. Please write more of them. Chapters 2 and 3 of "Flotsam and Jetsam" by Wonderbee31 are two chapters of the Harmony story "Scar Head." Please adopt it and finish it. Chapter 1 of "Flotsam and Jetsam" is the beginning of a crossover of HP The Munsters. It was completed by Clell65619 under the title "Dodgers, Dresses, Teddy Bears and Spot," a great story. |
josamen1 chapter 7 . 6/17 I think anybody would hate the guts of a person if they found themselves wearing said person's guts...yuck and turkish delight...yuck...stuff tastes like a perfume factory |
Ev1l.Eva chapter 18 . 6/9 Wow really great story just like the others I have read of yours. I just don’t see the “Taking the P.I.S.S” story? Will keep reading more of your other stories. |
AhsokaTano2291 chapter 18 . 4/24 Along with every other one of your stories. this one is excellent. I love the different route you took in this story. Great job as always |