|Reviews for A Call to Arms|
| Netbug-Archive chapter 6 . 6/30/2012
I really liked the ending! :D
Anyways, this was a good read. I liked the concept and all the different adventures that brought everyone together.
| Netbug-Archive chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
"Milly, that was fantastic!" Adyson exclaimed, hugging the girl. "Now we don't have to worry about them anymore."
"Not anymore," Gretchen corrected.
I'm a little confused by this. What is she correcting, exactly?
A few quotation marks are missing in spots.
| Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Other than Jeremy seeming a bit ruder than average at times, the teen's dialog is great. xD I really liked the little "Where's Perry?" conversation.
| Punzie the Platypus chapter 6 . 5/6/2012
| Punzie the Platypus chapter 3 . 4/22/2012
| Jessie Hamster chapter 6 . 4/21/2012
So it ends at that? Well anyway I like it. cool story.
| Punzie the Platypus chapter 2 . 4/21/2012
This is an amazing chapter. I love Jenny and Albert's interaction! Great job!
| Punzie the Platypus chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
A very good start so far!
| Lisanna Strauss chapter 6 . 3/22/2012
I loved it
| Midnight4568 chapter 6 . 1/11/2012
Great end to a great story!
You make everything so descriptive, which is good.
I lol-ed at the "family curse jar" part.
I also lol-ed harder at the line "You messed with the wrong people...and you messed with the wrong platypus."
Can't wait for your next story!
| ForThoseWhoLikeToMoveItMoveIt chapter 6 . 1/6/2012
| Leopardlover1002 chapter 5 . 12/18/2011
| Username Not Known chapter 5 . 12/16/2011
Great story, buddy! Try to put Phinbella, Feretchen, Balinger, and Adyford moments at the end! Especially Phinbella!
| Billy Arratoon chapter 4 . 12/5/2011
Please tell me Phineas finds out and confronts Candace about trying to bust them fr the entire summer, even when some of the projects they did were for her. Maybe he can find out when Candace says that once they stop Doof2, she will bust them.
If not, I understand.
| Username Not Known chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
Great job on the ch.! Also, Perry's lair will be about Phineas and Ferb.