|Reviews for Morning|
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Of course Nezumi would have to be half asleep to say something sweet like that
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Awww more please too good to stop
| Rinnie-desu chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Sooo sweet *-* Y is it so sweet? *-* Hey, can I translate it to Polish and publish on my site? Of course I'll say that I'm not an author and add link to original Can I?
| yaoi'eater chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
aww this was so cute :'3 Nezumi sleepwalking ... teehee :3 once again , amazing work ! keep it up ! x
| Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
too sweet! I like!
| Rangerskirt chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
It's quite boring and cliche really, you need to broaden your aspects of where to take this.
You need some more description by using nouns, it'll drag out your word count dramatically and keep more interest than just
"I love you, love you too"
*both go to sleep"
Which is pretty much all this story is.
Just feedback, not trying to be a jerk. But I know it will sound that way.