| Reviews for Much Better Than Doing Lines |
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   slayest.slayer.to.ever.slay chapter 4 . 12/4/2023 *Breathless* |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/19/2023 More please |
| HL chapter 4 . 11/22/2021 Loved it. Love the combination of control and tenderness, both are equally as erotic. |
| thoushaltnottpass chapter 1 . 10/31/2020 Dylan Saunders? Is this a StarKid reference or a coincidence? |
| Ssergit chapter 1 . 1/29/2019 Oh dear lord. This is fantastic. |
| acetwolf94 chapter 9 . 11/20/2018 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/31/2018 I really enjoyed reading this until I got to your author note on Chapter 9. You absolutely offended me that you assume conservatives do not enjoy sex or do not enjoy rougher sex. Conservatives do enjoy sex, even rougher sex, and I suggest you refrain from including your political preferences when you write. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/24/2018 Pleasssssseeeee write an add on(seperate story) to this where you continue when they start dating! It's to good to already be over! |
| Angela Molina chapter 9 . 1/8/2018 Started off ok, but got more ridiculous with each chapter. I forced myself to read to the end hoping it would get better and was severely disappointed. Complete waste of time. |
| 33o9 chapter 9 . 12/20/2017 AHHHHH THIS MADE ME FEEL SO WARM AND FLUFFY INSIDE OMFG HOW DO YOU MAKE SUCH AMAZING FANFICSSSSSS?! I just loved how Remus went all nervous and shy at the end and then Hermione’s last sentence.. AHHH |
| 33o9 chapter 9 . 12/11/2017 wow holy fucking shit in a bag, wow im sad now it’s over |
| Hermione Lyra Malfoy-Riddle chapter 9 . 11/22/2017 eh hotish |
| MadMadameA chapter 9 . 9/18/2017 I thoroughly enjoy this story |
| saba8611 chapter 7 . 8/12/2017 When did he take her bra off? |
| Sissy Boo chapter 6 . 9/7/2016 That was a little too much over the top. I could have lived with the boys but to bring Snape into the room with her. Ugh. |