|Reviews for Heavy In Your Arms|
| Jayla Fire Gal chapter 6 . 7/10
Wow! I really like this story! It is really well written! Please don't leave it ending here!
| Amelia Cox chapter 6 . 1/28/2015
This is absolutely fantastic! Please, please, please write more. Please?
| otakuxfanxgirl chapter 6 . 2/9/2014
Very cool fanfic
Can't wait for moooore :3
| Lothelen chapter 6 . 7/7/2013
Please update! This is one of the few good Frodomances on the site, and I want MOOOOOOORE! RAWR!
| Anonymous chapter 6 . 4/24/2013
Please continue. Your storys are always the best.
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/24/2013
Great story PLEASE continue! :)
| Miss Pookie Fethers chapter 6 . 3/31/2013
I haven't looked at this story for SO long, and I'm really sorry about that! I've just spent two days re-reading it from the very beginning, and I think it is just BRILLIANT so far! :D
I hope you update again soon! :)
- Pookie Fethers ;)
| LOTR fan chapter 6 . 3/15/2013
i Love this story all your stories are great
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/11/2013
please update soon! :)
| Avid LOTR Reader chapter 6 . 2/24/2013
Luckily, I remember this story (most of it) so I didn't have to go back. Anyhow, wow! Long time no read! I've almost forget about this. First thing, it's not Middle Earth. It's Middle-earth. It's a common mistake. I also think the sentence for the map could have been worded better. The grammar isn't right, they didn't say Yeah, they said Yes, among other things. Just saying. It works for this story though. I thought she just hurt her arm, but must have hurt her spine too, otherwise she wouldn't need to stay at Frodo's smial. Frodo's speech is quite all over the place, and some of it didn't even make sense, you know, the part after Lila asked what happened? A cookie? For breakfast? Unless it's second breakfast? She is not well, shouldn't she be getting plenty of tea and lots of food, considering she's a hobbit? The part where Frodo is curious about Lila doesn't sound right either. If Lila is twenty-eight, that means she's eighteen in human years. Ted's last line I think needs a look at too. And the characters are a bit out of character. Overall, I like this story for it has good potential, and Lila is a very likable hobbit lass. Can't wait for more.
| Isabeau Jones chapter 6 . 2/15/2013
Yaaaaaaaaaaay! You're back! :D Great job on the update!
| One after 909 chapter 6 . 2/2/2013
will you continue this story ? :c
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2013
Your stories always seem so professional.
| Bacon chapter 6 . 12/25/2012
Awww I really hope you update soon!
| Princesa de la Luna chapter 6 . 10/5/2012
interesting story, please keep on updating it and making the chapters as long as possible thanks.
ps: will chapter 7 be coming out in october something i hope so.