Reviews for Waiting
midnightstardust chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Aww...the feels...T.T I love this story! You portrayed the characters really well!
kuja-ichi chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Aww, that was so sweet! I was really touched :)
TheVintageFeminist chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Broke my heart...TT_TT Please update...
lf-deleted chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Hello! _

When I first read the plot for this fan fic., I thought, "Hey, this sounds pretty interesting." So I decided to read this (while doing my Science homework, pshh xD;;).

I really liked this fic., mainly because it's so well-written that it makes me want to start bawling. Honest to God, if any of my family members came in right about now, well... Not quite sure what to say about that...

On another note, you really made Okita and Sei in-character. Every choice of words was perfect in my opinion, and the italics were a nice touch to add some effect. The scenes all formed in my mind clearly (which is something to really congratulate you over, considering that I have severe problems with visualizing scenes while reading stories).

All in all, this was one of the most epic sad fan fictions I've ever read. One thing I have to add, though, was that it would've been nice to add some of Okita's unexpected humour (I don't mean to insult you by saying that or anything, but I'm really sorry if I did insult you in some way by saying that! [.)


P.S. Sorry, most of my review was just a lot of plain-out rambling... It's my first time reviewing on a Kaze Hikaru fan fiction...