Reviews for wildly coherent in a watery deep
Mistress of Solitude chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Absolutely beautiful.
I love the way you wrote this.
A sad story, but worth every word.
kingslayers chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Well, fuck.

That was amazing.

I'm actually a Tori-fan (lolkay, Tori-haters come at me bro) and I really loved this. It was so emotional and sad and the thing is, it seems angsty until you read the last paragraph because that's just so sad that everything dulls in comparison, and it's just as beautiful as it is devastating so I hope you feel proud of this because ohmygod, all of the feels for this fic.

You're a really talented writer and the non-linear timeline was a stroke of genius in my fabulous opinion. ;)

Thanks for a fantastic and complex read,

Jane xx
Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I like it. But I'm not completely understanding it. Could you please Private Message me and tell me what it's about? I would really like an explanation.
Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
I like it. But I'm not completely understanding it. Could you please Private Message me and tell me what it's about? I would really like an explanation.
pariswindspeed chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Perfect, perfect, perfect. (And we all know nothing is, except for this fic - PERFECT.)

I'm being redundant, excuse me. But this is perfect and so raw and oh my god, it makes me hurt.

Amazing.

-a.
seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Ugh, your writing is beautiful. This fic, though...i mean, it hurts and it makes me feel happy at the same time. I also like how there isn't really a specific timeline; the disconnectedness of it really brings it more to life than before.

Just ugh Lara you are perfect and this is lovely and yes.

Sorry my review sucks okay bye.
xBettiolx13 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
This is beautifully written, you did a wonderful job every word flows perfectly together and it's great. I found it a little depressing because at the end Tori dies. It's sad if it wasn't worded the way it was with little detail and if it wasn't a lovely story I probably would not have loved it, I would have hated it, I would have only like it. I like the idea that you put in it love never dies, well until someone else does, I was actually in tears, you are a great writter, sorry for babbling on
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Good Story
coffee-stained lips chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
I /love/ this. I men I love everything you write but /this/...

It's just so wonderfully written; the words flow so well together and the words you string together are just magical words. I really love this to bits and pieces, and it's these fics that, for awhile, make me like Tori and BeckTori. Only you can do thy to me, and thank you. Keep writing until your dying days.