Reviews for Visiting Ikebukuro
Blaufeder chapter 12 . 2/18

Twins and a 23 old son huh?

Gilbert is total Izayas father! Otherwise she would not looks with sad eyes onto Gilbert...and this Gil-chan sounded like Izaya opps...

Huh critic for inprovement?
Only Ideas. You could involve a pair of accidents for Gilbert. Getting his clothes shredded than getting kidnapped by Izaya again and being forced to wear Izayas clothes as substitute. Throw in the old gag with a shield painter on his ladder and a can of Black paint that lands on Gilberts head. water resistent black paint. Now throw in a angry yakuza group that wants to get revenge on Izaya or Shiki and his group that have found out who arranged Akanes kidnapping and now want to have a 'talk' with him. mistaken Identity accident plus kidnapping accident complete. Now a boring bystander gaping on Izaya when he and Shizuo are fighting like: "how are you here!? you were just kidnapped by yakuza?!" When my theory is correct and in the next chapter Gilbert learns that Izaya is his child than the yakuza can talk about what they all want to do to izaya and the entire time Gilbert listens to that and while he looks calm on the outside inner he becomes angrier and angrier by the minute. Now a brainless muscle minion with no sense of coordination and a bottle of bleach that lands on Gilberts head washing out the Black paint him scary smiling and going into Motherbear mode and Izaya and Shizuo to the rescue? Epic fight and awesome Gilbertsan guaranteed. hell throw in Shinra and Celty afterwards for kicks. A small wound on Gilberts cheek. A overbearing Duo of Izaya and Shizuo a Trip to doctor Shinra. The van Gang is there too. schocking relevations:
"Y-you are Izayas father!?
"Izaya has parents?! He was not birthed from the darkness as the avatar of all evil and chaos?!"
"you are how old?!"
Shizuo intense staring at Gilbert.
"S-shizuo no! That's Izayas father! He's to old for you!"
"yay! Go Shizuo! Why only Izaya!? Love triangle and awesome three some! Go for it, Shizuo!"
surprising guests by Simon that want to take the chance and steal Gilbert from Shizuo because they are not that happy that he's claiming him.

"Who are you?!"
"Gilbert's old lover here to take him back. He is mine. He shall become one with russia again..."

ah the possibilities are endless...
"Who is that?"
Cecil Saint chapter 3 . 11/1/2016
I think the idiot would either be Hungary or Germany. Maybe Switzerland, but I don't really think so.
Luri chapter 12 . 9/13/2016
FINALLY! the new chapter! I love it!. Oh! IZAYA'S MOMMY IS GILBERT'S old friend.

This is amazing!
TouchDouche chapter 12 . 8/28/2016
vanessaotaku1 chapter 12 . 8/3/2016
this is awesome!
StuckInTheWall88 chapter 12 . 6/10/2016
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! This is so amazing, Shizuo is protective and Izaya is himself always trying to make em angry! I sorta wanna see Iggy and Gil fight! (A REAL fight! *cough cough* who said Iggy can't throw some chairs and Gil's gonna stay confused and worried this whole fix eh...?) Izaya's and Shizuo's reactions would be priceless (At lest that's how I'm imagining it CX) Ahhhhhh... This is the best fanfic ever... Please continue! *Starts baking cookies* 333 (PruEng Maybe?) #OTP
Horsemuon17 chapter 11 . 12/28/2015
Please continue!
Smarthiz chapter 10 . 3/26/2015
Hope you'll updatesoosn ;)
ClosetedOtakus24 chapter 3 . 3/14/2015
America. The idiot is America
Guest chapter 10 . 2/14/2015
I now need Yaoi between Shizuo,Prussia,and Izaya please
anime666 chapter 10 . 12/4/2014
Update soon, damn it ! It's sooo cooll !
ravenlogan12 chapter 10 . 10/2/2014
Yay! You updated! Im so happy!
Coco chapter 10 . 9/30/2014
Don't forget that Gil-chan speaks russian it can lead up to something interesting with simon russia and gil
Kintoki Kin chapter 10 . 10/1/2014
OMG, I love this fic! It's so awesome! And why is it so short.. TT . TT Hope you update soon!
SilverPhantom88 chapter 9 . 7/5/2014
This is actually really good. Please continue! T.T pretty please!
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