|Reviews for Get Up Them Apples|
| Matriarch chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
A couple errors;
*Kevin was forced to stop the experiments long ago; he did this privately, developing other technological advancements to cover up. When Masterson, a half-human thing of a man escaped, which Kevin intended, officials planned to seize Horizine, but were ultimately destroyed.
*AK47s [specifically a fully-automatic one], hand grenades, [and in some cities] combat knives are either/both difficult or illegal to possess in America.
| exia111149 chapter 3 . 4/17/2012
can you please add more words to a chapter as it is bad beyond description(jokes) Seriously... you might want to expand your chapters to fit about a 1000 words per chapter