|Reviews for Girly|
| Ascarde chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Cmon, Yuri aint that big of a tomboy, if she can be considered one at all.
As a personal fan of YurixNashi, I appreciate this being written. The pairing for me just makes sense and while I support KanadexNashi, the anime just made Yuri and Otonashi click.
Apart from being to short, the question of if Yuri is so much of a tomboy that this shocks Otonashi, this story seems good enough. Too short to add to favorites, however.
My issue with the length stems from the fact if this was a thousand words I wouldve likely insta-faved. Theres no buildup. When Yuri kisses Otonashi the reactions just seem flat. It just seems like a scene out of a novel with the final climactic big damn kiss, but lacking the background buildup necessary for a scene like this to work.
| Divine Fury chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Oh, I can see the tears now :D
| Dragonknight5051 chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I'm all for otanashixyuri dude
| Music-chan loves anime chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
| Angel chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Cuuuuuute! I'm a huge otonashi/angel fan and i normally dont like otonashi and yuri... But this was just so cuuuuute! You should continue it and make it a full story instead of just a oneshot. :)
| Randz Kitsu chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Short and nice.. d
Planing making another one like this? O.o
| lost angel chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
keep going id lol if there where more seans were they get "closer" and lost some clothing just saying dont know if the site alowws that stuff but whatever
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Haha, Yuri sure is bold even when she is girly. That scene was so cute :3 I kinda wished there would be more to it tho. Thanks for the story
| black beat chapter 1 . 9/18/2011