Reviews for Why We Don't Go In Gramps' Room
Vampire-Queen-Kazumi chapter 25 . 6/6
just answer me this one thing that it keeps bugging me, is Ace ever going to fuck properly Luffy?, and give me a Yes, No, answer, please, i dont know if my heart can keep this teasing you keep giving us T.T, and other thing, how the hell is Luffy going to survive this?

See ya :)
ASLfangirl chapter 25 . 6/4
Awesome chapter for an awesome fic...seriously, I started laughing when Ace noticed the "wet" thing, and continued up until the last word of the chapter... even though I also got a little worried at the end...what the hell is Luffy gonna do?! Oh Garp...you insane gramps...what have you done?
Love how you write Dragon...I think it is so fitting... :3
And last chapter you were also mean to little Lu...first he can't get some, now he has to swim? You should it up to him... Like let him at least get some before the fic ends! XD (but you got me wondering, are they ever going to suceed in doing it? XD)
Thanks for the amazing chapter and for being amazing! Looking forward to the next! ;)
xxwhite-firexx chapter 25 . 6/2
Jiejie! -hugs you hard- I've finally descended from a trip to the mountains! I'll explain in my PM to you later haha! It was a very holy and meaningful pilgrimage. :)

And, so I begin this review with a feeling of... dread. When you said that you'd get back at me for all the food porn that I bestow upon you, I was expecting many things... but not THAT. Oh God, Ace. I had an idea of WHAT happened to you with That Man, but I was just... No. No. God, no. Nooooooooooo -insert Darth Vader voice-

First few paragraphs, and I'm dying already? Sly move, Jiejie. Sly move.

Luffy, Luffy, seriously, even if your brother is like Fatty McFatfat (or rather Hotty McHothot), this is... too much... oh my God, I am dying, I love this hahahahahahahahaha! What unholy and disproportionate retribution! I'm dying, Oh God...

Okay, Okay, I'm good now. -takes a deep breath and then reads the whole conversation between Dragon and Luffy- OH GOD, LUFFY, YOU NEED THE TALK. NOW. DRAGON, WHAT ARE YOU DOING? TELL HIM THE TRUTH.

I FREAKING KNEW IT. I FREAKING CALLED IT. ACE. ROGER'S... THAT MAN'S... I'M DEAD. WHAT IS THIS? JIEJIE, WHY?! WHY?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OH GOD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA TAKE THAT SHOWER, ACE. YOU WILL NEED BUCKETS OF BLEACH. :)))))))

Yes, Ace. Yes, Dragon. I completely agree with "The Cool Side." Roger is the cause of many miseries. Including... this... this moment. This moment just... takes the cake I don't even- :))))

Oh, oh, noooo DANGER GARP IS HERE. At this point, I am crying and laughing. I swear to God, Jiejie. Monkey Danger Garp needs a freaking theme song equivalent to the Jaws theme. This is not going to end well. Especially for poor Luffy. I mean... he's already going to miss out on all those gaming content! Wow, this guy isn't winning in this chapter. At first, I thought Luffy would be a winner here, but now the tables have turned! It's madness, I tell you! MADNESS!

Sabo. Sabo, please. You're a good man. You're a bro. You're the SaBro that Jiejie and I see whenever you're with your Bro-for-Life, Ace. Just throw in the towel. Hell, you can even SABO-tage Smelly's turn. Your loss can't be as bad as your bros' loss because DANGER GARP. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Come on, Ace. You're in the home stretch. Break's almost over. You can do this, you trooper, you. I believe in you. :)

And, I believe in you, Jiejie. I believe in your potential to make me laugh and cry some more just like what I'm doing now. Oh, yes. I think you've had your payback. This is a good payback. I don't know how to counter this, but I'll try! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME? BUT I LOVE YOU ANYWAY! :)))

Alright, talk to you in a bit! Keep writing this marvelous masterpiece of a disaster that is DUN DUN DUN, DANGER GARP.
asldork chapter 25 . 5/31
Omg this chapter made me laugh so hard! I feel so sorry for Luffy, as for Ace being pissed on I thought it was hilarious (I'm sorry Ace). It's sad to know he has to go back to CBU soon but I still can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm excited to see what kind of trouble they're all going to get into and Garp's reaction (the horror of the fists of love).
Also, I can't wait to see more acelu in this fic or maybe the sequel if there will be one, and maybe they can continue from where they left off that night hem hem. Anyways...KEEP UPDATING PLZ! :) :) :)
Bibi chapter 12 . 4/29
I cried ;(
asldork chapter 24 . 3/27
Oh my god I love your story so much. PLEASE UPDATE DON'T LEAVE ME AT THE CLIFFHANGER!
ThousandxSunny chapter 24 . 2/9
You're downright EVIL XD the whole time all i could do was anticipate that things were going to finally progress...i should've realised...i feel so utterly foolish for falling for that hahaha it's a clear pattern that they never proceed to complete the third base...I SHOULD'VE REALISED WHEN HE WAS COUNTING DOWN ahhh oh well, it just means i'm going to be able to read more of your stories, alls well that ends well :')
MeganeD-chan chapter 24 . 1/31
I HATE YOU! NOOO ACCEEE WAAKEE UPP! YOU JERK! *pant**pant*
...I'm sorry but I really really hate you. Good thing I'm not very good at killing people, or you maybe won't make it to the next chapter, I assure you. Seriously, narcolepsy!? I always knew that narcolepsy is such a troublesome though. But really, why now-of all time? And at the yummy part!? I swear my family is giving me one of those weird stares right now. Because I just literally screaming out my soul! *pulling out my hair*
Poor Lu. C'mere, sweetheart, I'll give you one of my best hug. *squeeze* okay. I'm done. I won't ask you again, dear author. You're breaking my poor heart! So I'm gonna sulking and crying right there, in the corner of the room. Please call me again when you're ready to fix things.

But don't worry. I hate you but I'm still love you and your story. Well then, see ya later. In the afterlife. No, just kidding.

...and look how excited I was when I looking at the chapter's title. The first Midnight ever.
Ellie chapter 24 . 1/14
Ace had a boyfriend . . . I wonder who he was and why they broke up . . . I think I have an idea on who . . . Lol I don't know why I was enjoying the chapter but I was focused on that instead. Now because of that I'm so curious about ace's previous love lives. Does he have an ex girlfriend too ? Does Luffy or Sabo know about his ex? Will we ever see him? Lol I'm just so curious now

But back to the actual chapter. I already knew they weren't going to do it but I didn't know how you were going to ruin it for them. I honestly forgot ace has narcolepsy lol That was a perfect way to ruin the sex scene. Ace is gonna feel so upset and mad lol I thought it was really funny overall. AND WHEN LUFFY LITERALLY BLEW ON ACE'S DICK OMG LMAO how is luffy gonna get ace back to the yard with the others . . . Normally I would feel bad for Ace after every chapter but now I feel bad for luffy. Poor luffy lol

Also, is Sabo okay? LOL How did he go home after Ace kicked his ass. Did he crawl back lol
teengens chapter 24 . 1/13
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS HOT. AAAAND OF COURSE IT GETS INTERRUPTED. GO SEE A FREAKIN DOCTOR ACE! NARCOLEPSY IS A SERIOUS CONDITION DAMMIT. UUUGGGGHHHHH EVERY TIME.

Thanks for the amazing chapter. I really can't wait for the next one!
anniemae chapter 24 . 1/4
by "someone" did you mean me? yes, yes you are -_-
i can't stay mad at my favorite ff writer though! this story is too amazing... even if sometimes i wanna slap Luffy/Garp (depends on the chapter at this point)
please please please update soon!
phonenix chapter 24 . 1/3
... you know, I should really kill you for this. WHY MUST YOU MAKE THEM STOP RIGHT WHEN IT STARTS GETTING SERIOUS?!
ah, sorry. I don't think I reviewed for this yet. but, I've been reading it for quite a while. but, seriously. they should have done it this chapter.
AwesomeGil22 chapter 24 . 1/2
OH MY GOD IT WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART LMFAOOO xD I knew there was something up! I was totally waiting for it xD LOL Ughh one of the worst cliffhangers ever! BUT I STILL LOVE IT AMG THE TORTUUUREEEE /sobs in the corner/ I did enjoy that while it lasted lol. Anyways, I've been following your story for a while now and I'm so thankful for your hardwork to update it. This is just lovely 3 I can't wait for more~ Haha~ I wonder how Luffy is going to get out of this one xD
AnimeCub chapter 24 . 12/31/2015
Damn he just left him Damn and yes Luffy how would you do that
Le.Jester.Vixen chapter 24 . 12/31/2015
Awesome chapter. Loved the twi
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