|Reviews for Just Beneath The Surface|
| shanejayell chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Not bad. Gets the feeling right for the series...
| TheByronicMan chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Let me begin by stating that I'm not into poetry, so I can't exactly give an authoritative review on that part. But in my uninformed view it scans well and comes across as well-written. I think it would really speak to its target audience.
As for the 2nd part, it shows a great deal of promise. I'd love to see more Newsflesh fic from you. Only 2 errors caught my eye, and that was a refreshing change from much of what I've read around here.
(If you're interested, it would be "horde," not "hoard," and I'm sure you meant to put a comma at the end of that clause rather than a semicolon.)