|Reviews for Human|
| Tomoyo Kinomoto chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Wow, this is really good. My only comment is that you should link the first two sentences into one so that the ending feels more choppy. Nice work.
| VinFortuonaBlack chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
That ish sad D: I always wondered about Human.
| hoping2improve chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
I'm happy that I found this work - there's a sad derth of Mistborn fanfiction, I think, for such a wonderful series.
I love the sentence structure here - the short, clipped, rushed feeling it imparts is sudden and effective. We don't know the character, we're not supposed to, but his suffering is intimate nonetheless.
The twist at the end is delightfully gut-wrenching, feeling more than seeing the implied transformation into a koloss.
His thoughts in the last passage are a great conclusion, and a poignant summation of the horrifying revalation in "Hero of Ages" of what the koloss truly are.
Wonderfully written and well-executed. I do hope to see more in this vein from you. :)