Reviews for Dark Desires
Guest chapter 17 . 3/2
I'm glad you didn't go in to the whole 'Kaname suddenly gives a fuck and somehow heals Zero and makes him feel like a real person' line of bullshit. LMAO
Tony-Nelly chapter 16 . 2/19
You know what? I'm happy. Really, I am.
Zero suffered so much that I wanted him to die. So that he could be free and at peace. It was a sad story and I hate kaname with a passion now, but still, even kaname could not or cid or noctice could beat death. So in the end, zero did win. And at this point, I'm happy.
Kitty-chan99 chapter 17 . 2/16
This was beautiful yet tragic. I cried so much in the end. Your writing is amazing; I just wish Zero could have had a happier end v.v but since this is a dark fic I knew that wouldn't happen.
hotxhotguy chapter 17 . 1/28
Still doesn't change the fact that Zero got a shitty ending
zerokiryu2.0 chapter 17 . 10/30/2014
Hi zerokiryu2.0 here I would like to say that the author is right you are all loser it is awesome
TwinSanity95 chapter 17 . 4/10/2014
I liked your story alot even though zero never got love but died instead :)
Amalthia chapter 17 . 11/6/2013
i think your writing is beautiful and if others cant see that then your right .i hope others relize this soon hun. hehe love your peaces you write
YaoiLoverStories chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
are you using characters from final fantasy or something like that
Guest chapter 16 . 7/3/2013
Poor zero...I loved your story in some dark twisted way but it also deadly disturbed me :/ anyway I guess what I'm trying to say is that your are an amazing writer and I hope u decide 2 do another story l
Keksi626 chapter 10 . 8/18/2012
well written:) I still love it and still want to go onto the next chapter:) I especially like the last part of this chapter. Well done
Keksi626 chapter 7 . 8/18/2012
I use my deviantArt name as always
hmmm wow, pretty bizarre chapter, and yet I LOVED it! I feel kinda creepy now hehe:) well written and well...I like it when chapters are short in stead of looooong...cause then I normally lose my concentration:/ so, for me it's fine that you've had some short chapters:) looking forward to the next
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
Great chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
AWESOMENESS! Seriously, very well written
shimschiffer chapter 16 . 5/15/2012
dear author, i try to find this kind of story where zero die and finally everyone regret for all that they done for hurting zero..even though in your story it's ended just zero dead and u not mentioned anything about others after that, it still a good story...most of the story that i read end up zero forgive kaname and they live happily ever after..i know that happy ending is good but anyway sometimes life is suck...and ur story is great...there is no need to make zero continue living after what happen to him in this story..he deserve to die in peace..

thank you for this story...

anyway, i still love both zero & kaname;)
rosaikibu chapter 17 . 5/13/2012
well...i have no objections to this ending...

you had rework somewhere around...it sound logical though...

anyway, i just wanna say, i'd luv the begining of the story...the building is good...just the slope to ending is too steep (fast) but it's logical...i could have been streched longer though...with nortics fight with kaname and how the rest building up to takeover zero like cid and perhaps include yagari and sayori...all those evil ones...

and maybe then after too much, zero would decide on his final path...well you could someone to save him (kaname) and how that incident could turn everyone understanding that their dark desire is to luv zero instead of pushing him to death...

well, not sure how i blah so much here...anyway...it's a good try!
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