Reviews for Spiral Dragon
fray253 chapter 11 . 3/21/2013
Techpriest of Tzeentch chapter 8 . 2/20/2013
Bah, having changed it to this, there's no connection to Keri calling it Dragonrut instead of Dragonbane
SuperiorShortness chapter 11 . 2/16/2013
More required...

I hope you keep to a more serious tone... The random bits of quirkiness, that you obviously put in for comedic relief I feel detract from the story.

A Fan,
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 11 . 2/9/2013
Entertaining chapter. Thanks for the update.
LordsFire chapter 11 . 2/5/2013
Ahh, nothing like a nice, light-hearted variation on phase 2. Forest of snacks indeed.

Also nice to have a big long chapter on this story; I've always had a fascination with dragons, so this is pretty much my favorite spur from your Mischief Fragments.
Kudou Shinichi chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
Cool crossover! Go Hinata!
erik chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
Great writing that left me lol at the end. Thanks.
erik chapter 5 . 2/1/2013
Great fun read, with Sasuke's sharing of the pain leading me to think of him putting Itachi on a dating site.
Bobboky chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
Very very awesome
demon chapter 11 . 1/30/2013
I notice that you made that 4 and 4 thing. Where 4 in japanese means death.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/30/2013
You'd be fun if the elemental countries didn't have dentists, and medical jutsu didn't work on teeth.
ariel stormcloud chapter 11 . 1/30/2013
great story
Obfuscated chapter 11 . 1/30/2013
Man, why do I foresee 'complications' with the Sakura clone ?

Something about only the part of her mind that is still Naruto dismissing...
lordamnesia chapter 11 . 1/29/2013
Rofl, poor Orochimaru!
Lousy Poet Automaton chapter 11 . 1/29/2013
It's been a long time since I've actually laughed out loud reading a fanfic.

Thanks for that. The peak of the moment was "Ah wiww wemembew fiss," coz I couldn't help imagining Orochimaru turning into a chibi and shaking his fist.
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