Reviews for Spiral Dragon
Joe Fenton chapter 19 . 12/10/2018
Time skip! Hope this Naruto had better training than canon. Canon Naruto learned virtually nothing over the time skip.
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 19 . 12/10/2018
I look forward to the next chapter.
Armiture chapter 1 . 12/10/2018
I like what you've done with Toltiir to make it more of a great old one.
dogbertcarroll chapter 18 . 10/22/2018
why have I not been getting my update notifications?!

Great story, more please.
addicted2text chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
A new story? (Or an update to an older one at any rate...)

And I missed it?

OK, now I'm hacked off because I could have sworn I'd followed you a long time ago so this sort of thing wouldn't happen any more!

Hmm... On the other hand that means there's chapters and chapters of new (to me) unread text by an author who never fails to brighten up my day.

OK, I'm following you again so this won't happen again and cancelling the rest of my evening. I'm going to be too busy reading and going to my happy place to do anything else tonight!

PS: Thank you for sharing your work with us! It really does mean a lot to those of us who've been reading you for over a decade or more! I really wish I had more than words to offer you for a debt of years and years of entertainment.
Tendragos chapter 18 . 8/3/2018
I love this story. The lines about gnomish AA gun gave me a big laugh, I'm a former WoW player and that just made me remember Gnomergan.
Breitve chapter 18 . 7/29/2018
As long as narutos girls get to have fun on dragonback, that is the only plan that matters.
Now, what are the odds of finding Temari and getting her help as well. Wind from dragonback could be impressive. And it would be amusing to see Tenten and Hinata react to her presence
Armiture chapter 4 . 7/28/2018
I rather liked how Toltiir trolled Jimo, and Naruto's landing on the ship, ah that was a classic Naruto style blunder. Kudos for that.
Armiture chapter 3 . 7/28/2018
I liked the signs at the inn, best one I've seen for a bar was in a webcomic, "If you can still read this sign you're too sober."
keichan2 chapter 18 . 7/28/2018
Absolutely hilarious! :-D

(As a side note, I believe that you quite nicely painted the chaos of this situation!)

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 18 . 7/27/2018
I look forward to the next chapter.
Joe Fenton chapter 18 . 7/27/2018
No plan survives the first encounter, or as we see here, the second, or third, or fourth...
Kithrin chapter 18 . 7/27/2018
the middle of the chapter feels really really weird and awkward for some reason.
FreeAllFrogs chapter 18 . 7/27/2018
I live in Phoenix. Blasted monsoons. Love the story.
frisbeeg70 chapter 17 . 7/11/2018
I don't think I've ever seen someone use dynamic marking on Orochimaru's face. Genius.
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