Reviews for Spiral Dragon
keichan2 chapter 16 . 6/27/2018
Nice to have Konoha NOT surprised by the attack… Even if they won’t have much time to prepare…

I get the feeling that there will be CHAOS soon! :-D

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!
Guest chapter 16 . 6/19/2018
This is a throughly enjoyable read. Most of what I find on the site is seirous and boring. It's great to see a writer do stuff like this.
ARSLOTHES chapter 16 . 6/18/2018
hope the umi no misaki harem are part of the pairing
Kudou Shinichi chapter 16 . 6/18/2018
The build up to the chaos of the next few chapters is intense. I really appreciate that you're taking your time, because Jiraiya super spy and Shino little detective were great scenes.
rustyirongolem chapter 16 . 6/18/2018
So happy that this is getting updated. While short, the new chapters are still very good and seem to be building to a truly spectacular moment of "WTF?!" for all outside parties. Can't wait to see what happens when the whole thing kicks off.
Kithrin chapter 16 . 6/17/2018
nice to see you writing again.
Joe Fenton chapter 16 . 6/17/2018
Two abnormally short fights and the girls are gonna miss Naruto's fight! Something tells me there will be plenty of fighting for them to see soon. :)
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 16 . 6/17/2018
I look forward to the next chapter.
Joe Fenton chapter 15 . 6/14/2018
Cool - a rewrite since I last read this through. :) A little sad that the Gilligan parts are gone, but I can understand why as they aren't part of the story. A little sad that the Maidens of Sacrifice didn't make it into this chapter... they're supposed to be at the finals, right?
Minders chapter 15 . 6/14/2018
Wow. An update? A very pleasant surprise. Please keep going. Ff is severely lacking in stories like this nowadays.
Warehouse1 chapter 15 . 6/13/2018
Holy crap after so long an update?! Happy days :) :) :)
incy789 chapter 15 . 6/13/2018
So,. Akatsuki Will join this melee ? This will end well .
wolf-in-hell chapter 15 . 6/13/2018
Nice to see this one updated.
waltae chapter 15 . 6/13/2018
well...interesting. I was hopeing for a little more hilarity out of it. just gotta wait for next chapter. and hopefully it will be soon :P
DaMonkMan chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
Oh I didn't know you were re-writing it until the new chapter showed up. I guess I have to re-read it, what a shame. I was shocked when I saw this update. It is one of my all time favourite Naruto stories. You have one of the best Sasuke characterizations out of the hundreds of stories I've read. The best when it comes to non antagonist Sasuke, Time Braid has the best antagonist Sasuke. The characters feel their age, which is very understated and overlooked. So many stories feel like its adults in child bodies doing dumb things to pretend to be children. There are so many reasons I can list for why this story is so good but I'll just say that I am glad it's back. Now forgive me as I re-read it for the tenth time. This is what I get for reading a downloaded copy previously instead of doing it on the site. Glad to see you back and I look forward to future installments.
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