Reviews for Like a Poke in the Eye
Belker chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
I can totally picture all these scenes in my head, hehe. Especially when Steve started "impersonating a clock watching statue".
And Chin! Gotta love Chin, the center of Zen. "So ... what do we do when he really loses his shit?"
Chin shrugged, "Take pictures?"
Great job!
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Effie17 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Very good.
kunoichi chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Steve in protection mode you got love it
EnsignRo chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
great story and you cracked me up..."Take pictures" that was brilliant and so Chin!
SaKuRa-MIna chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
I agree with Chin...when Steve really loses it, take pictures! That should provide endless amounts of entertainment. Hilarious story. Loved the end with Danno wanting to shoot Steve, or at least have Kono shoot Steve since she has Danno's gun. Thanks for the story.
Effie chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Great story.
francis2 chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
I adore this story. So like Steve to lose his temper like that. And I adore the doctor for standing up to him.

(I think it must have been very cold when you wrote this, because there's a "br" after every sentence.)
conformityissuicide chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
This was great! I'm not sure if you know this, but you had 'br' at the end of every line and it was really distracting! You may want to delete those :) But I loved this story; it had me laughing out loud!
crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
That was good and funny. To even try to picture these people not letting Steve have his way and taking his phone was funny. Then Chin trying to calm all down and kono watching it all. Thank God for the doctor..lol And Danny wanting his gun to shoot Steve...really good. Sue
lilz54 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Too funny. Nicely done!
darkorangecat chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
I really enjoyed reading this. It had humor, anxiety and was really well written.
cytpotter chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
ha ha ha! Poor Steve! Though I pity the poor nurse! Imagine having to deal with an irate McGarrett! Great story!
lawslave chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Funny! Never seen a story where a non-criminal actually tried to defy Steve. You could smell the fear coming from the male nurse once sumo security arrived!

I hope this helps your writer's block with "Our Devoured Minds" Such an amazing chapter, dying to read more!