To quote Josef, "Very dramatic. I like it."

Loved it. Great job

Never poke an angry bear...

ah, Steve. he's like an angry puppy. scary, but puppies really do$n't know any better. :p

I can totally picture all these scenes in my head, hehe. Especially when Steve started "impersonating a clock watching statue".
And Chin! Gotta love Chin, the center of Zen. "So ... what do we do when he really loses his shit?"
Chin shrugged, "Take pictures?"
Great job!
/B

Very good.

Steve in protection mode you got love it

great story and you cracked me up..."Take pictures" that was brilliant and so Chin!

I agree with Chin...when Steve really loses it, take pictures! That should provide endless amounts of entertainment. Hilarious story. Loved the end with Danno wanting to shoot Steve, or at least have Kono shoot Steve since she has Danno's gun. Thanks for the story.

Great story.

I adore this story. So like Steve to lose his temper like that. And I adore the doctor for standing up to him.

(I think it must have been very cold when you wrote this, because there's a "br" after every sentence.)

This was great! I'm not sure if you know this, but you had 'br' at the end of every line and it was really distracting! You may want to delete those :) But I loved this story; it had me laughing out loud!

That was good and funny. To even try to picture these people not letting Steve have his way and taking his phone was funny. Then Chin trying to calm all down and kono watching it all. Thank God for the doctor..lol And Danny wanting his gun to shoot Steve...really good. Sue

Too funny. Nicely done!

I really enjoyed reading this. It had humor, anxiety and was really well written.