Truly beautiful writing here honey! I loved every second of this! Thank You!

This made me laugh so hard my sides hurt. Lol!

My heart.

Likeable story but so so American, it’s jarring

Just read this again. Its such a great story!

This had me laughing and crying. You did WELL, with the writing. Great job

"Because Im the chosen one" Im cackling

His way of phrasing adoption as a potential thing for them has me cackling. But at the same token that IS what adoption is. buying kids. Im cackling

Im reading this while on a bus and I am CACKLING. I wont spoil by saying the scene. I will say that Im not even halfway down the chappie so the Author will KNOW what Im cackling at.

Harry being all "If i cant remember, I can be honest" Rings true. I can see it

Conversations with kids are hilarious. I love that

Aww... I love that the Grangers were not only loved but also loved Harry. Harry was practically adopted by each family that he befriended. Theyd be honorary grandparents to James and Albus

If Lav really is pregnant with Rons baby, she is gonna HATE Pansy... This will be an interesting dynamic, i must admit

Purebloods being fascinated about muggle items like a cup sleeve for example just always has me like "Awwwwww". Its so adorable

I said before that it was paterna Granger side. I read later, it was Mama Granger and her side and whatever the respective maiden names were. Everything else I said still stands tho