Reviews for In the Beginning
ObsessedwReading chapter 3 . 1/28/2012
Great chapter. :) Looking forwars to the next update. :)
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 3 . 12/23/2011
nice one :)

can't wait to find out more about the helicopter:)

keep it up!
Guest chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
'One kick in the groin, 'cus Jack thought he deserved it' Lol! I couldn't stop laughing! (Yes, I am easily amused.) Anyway, when are you going to update next? This is really good!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Wow! Nice beginning! Keep writing! Please?
ksqoasikdfjv1 chapter 2 . 9/23/2011
Nice chapter :)

Update when you can!
Fire chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
I love this do an awesome job writing update soon.
Fire chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
I love your story.I think it is continue writing.
ObsessedwReading chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
Good chapter. :)
ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
I love this so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Nice , keep it up please , and make the next chapter longer :)
ksqoasikdfjv1 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
I like this so far.. even if it's short.. but I like it!

Keep up the good work! (