Reviews for Brothers2
jenna chapter 2 . 9/20/2011
You really need to work on fleshing things out more and adding some depth to your stories. You're merely reciting what's happening and not adding enough emotion and detail. The story is really flat.
VioletHawk chapter 2 . 9/20/2011
I'm glad that you made Dinozzo Sr. so horrible so we don't feel bad for him when Tony finds out who his birth family is :)
cheether chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
I bet that was a shock for Tim, can't wait til he tells Tony too.
mamakay chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Good start. Wow Tony and Tim blood brothers.
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