Reviews for This Tornado Loves You
LittleMissHugALot chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
love it. i always hate two worded reviews but that's all i can say; its wonderful, i would love a sequel.
LuckyGirl25 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
I really liked this chapter! Hope you write another chapter or two!
ColletteJackson chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
It was great! Fun fact: I was named after Cozette from Les Miserables

Yours Truly,

-Collette Kent
Kelly123 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
Umm...MSCL reference?

YES PLEASE!
BryonieAnne chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Wow, your writing skills are impeccable! Also, I like the realism you put into it. Ron and Hermione are regular teenage kids, obviously they have urges!
mcw1989 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Love love loved it! And all your other stories, for that matter :) I also read your bio and agree with all the statements/observations you made there. I really appreciate your willingness to stick to cannon not just in terms of the plot but also the characters personalities and being true to the deep amount of character development that Rowling gives us. That being said, please write/post more ASAP! I do l
mcw1989 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Love love loved it! And all your other stories, for that matter :) I also read your bio and agree with all the statements/observations you made there. I really appreciate your willingness to stick to cannon not just in terms of the plot but also the characters personalities and being true to the deep amount of character development that Rowling gives us. That being said, please write/post more ASAP! I do l
cleansweep21 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
This story is so wonderfully written; it captures Hermione's voice perfectly. In fact, I was almost laughing at some points, because I read your zany and hilarious profile, which is completely different from the voice here. It's quite a transistion!

I could really feel all of Hermione's emotions in this story, and there are quite a few to feel. And I loved the daydream scene...I totally agree with you, this was so much better than those porn star dreams because this was real.

PS: Don't apologize for the length...when a story is this good, length is a good thing!
SamAnne112 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
good story, but Ron's an ass. hes completely and utterly rude and shows little to no respect for Hermione. good story all in all though.
Athenais777 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I finished reading this and I feel rage and bitterness and like I want to hit Ron over the head to let him know what a bloody idiot he is. And that's good. That's really good because your writing really made me feel like a seventeen year old girl in love with a guy who seems completely oblivious. That's how good it was. It showcased beautifully how painfully a late bloomer Ron was when it came to maturity while Hermione was way ahead of the game. And the gap between the two of them hurt their relationship. In this story, it hurts deeply, badly, and I would say maybe irreversibly.

And this is where I am not sure I agree with your side of things because I don't think they could have overcome such a level of betrayal, no matter how great Hermione's ability to forgive or Ron's ability to redeem himself through a late outburst of maturity.

To be honest, I would have been on cloud nine if Hermione's patented daydream charm had been the real story and Popping Cherries on Sunday afternoon had been Lavender's own fantasy or Ron's nightmare. Okay, that might be my own patented daydream charm :)

No matter, I will agree to disagree because overall, it was one of the best Ron/Hermione during Lavender stories I've read. You write beautifully and captured teen angst with brilliance. I will definitely look for your next story.
KrystalFruit22 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
I only just skimmed this and will be reading the rest soon. I just wanted to tell you that I LOVE THE TITLE. Normally I don't feel so strongly about such small things, but it draws you right in. Very creative and original :)
ykickamoocow111 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
I love your writing style. I can also easily imagine Hermione using the daydream charm when Ron is going out with Lavender because at that point Hermione is feeling very low and the daydream charm giving her what she always wanted would provide Hermione a few hours away from reality and allow her to live out her greatest fantasy (losing her virginity with Ron).

I hope you continue to write Ron/Hermione stories in the future.
PuddingHead chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
OMG! Can't even render coherent thought this was like that good ;)

Not joking here guys, but that was maybe the best R/Hr story I've ever freaking read. It was just GUH! So emotional, so funny, so SAD. I actually was crying by the time I got to the end of it. Yeah, you reduced me to a blubbering ball of tears, are you happy now LOL.

More than any other story I've read this one just nailed Hermione's voice. You guys just get her SOOOOOO well. It was like I could literally feel her pain. Also, she was so canon and so was Ron. I felt like I was reading something Jo Rowling would actually not be ashamed of.

Please, Please, Please write more soon. You guys are my favorite authors on this site. If I had an account I would favorite you in 2 seconds!
veritaserumkills chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Um why don't you have more reviews? This was phenomenal! Omg so much detail, and I felt so bad at the end, when she realized...omg...JUST SO GOOD. I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW PERFECT. Well done, I was feeling all of Hermione's emotions, brilliant!
Anygirl100 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
FUCKING AMAZING!
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