Reviews for Sniper
TheOtherDakDak chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Awesome story/one-shot, I am thinking of writing a S.T.A.L.K.E.R. fan-fic and was wondering if we could team up, maybe write the story from tow different perspectives? PM me if you like the idea and have a spare moment.
Thanks
olly chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
just considering writing my own fan fiction and came across this. Well done, captures the desperate mood well, can't wait to get my own going
svobodavperjod chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Nice! I suggest you continue this same story, it would be awesome if you did that! Like the diary of a sniper.
Freedom for life! Svoboda Vperjod
SelvaBR chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Really good man, i hope you keep up the good job.

Only need to fix some time concordation sentences, but its just a detail.
MorsTactica chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
It was alright. You randomly switched perspectives mid sentence a couple times. I think that he was a bit innocent. Try to make your work a bit more gritty. Especially when using analogies. I would suggest you write anything big in 3rd person, Otherwise it will be more difficult. I like the idea of foreign S.T.A.L.K.E.R.s too, You can check out my story if you want. Overall: 7/10 for what you where trying to do.