Reviews for Long Night
the mystery of u chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
i say they should let time pass, like a few years, then they can have kids!
breannapierson1990 chapter 2 . 12/5/2014
well you could continue with their relationship and how it progresses as he learns control? or maybe they leave together and a few years later peter ends up biting her on a blood moon at her request?
What comes next chapter 2 . 4/14/2014
You could tell aobut Peters frist night as a wolf.
Phoenixfire513 chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
let Valrie get tired of all the waiting and then have her ask him to bite her i mean that would solve a lot of problems right there from one they could be togther even at night and they would still be able to communicate if i have read up on my werewolf phisoligy and finally make peter apprihensive about it make him opposed to it but Valerie always knew how to get under his skin and to get him to change his mind about anything so let it be a bit of a battle between the two till peter finally agrees. then go from there.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
Continue it from where you ended the last chapter
MidnightSnowSapphire chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
That was pretty neat. ;) Is this a one-shot, or will there be more? :-?

MidnightSnowSapphire
Alivas1998 chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
since the movie ended with Valerie showing off there child why don't you mention how she became pregnant
girlonfire6477 chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
I think u should make a continuation of the story maybe valerie could become wolf? Show more of their spending time together experincing there time together you should defently continue this.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
U had better write more or I might explode from suspense
Hailey J chapter 2 . 5/18/2012
Peter should turn Valerie into a wolf! That would be really romantic and then just like continue with them and their lives as wolves! that would be kind of awesome! Like just have them on the run and surviving together! You know? I am a total hopeless romantic so anything you could would be just awesome!
Bloodyravenheart13 chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
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Valeria relizes Peter cant completly control himself and asks him to bite her, and let her join him in the fur. They becom werewolves together
Eve Winchester chapter 2 . 1/31/2012
Love Love LOVE the story! Very Excited about reading more!
Dashone chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
Write about how he discovers new abilities both in human and wolf form. Also try to make it so that Valerie whenever she was injured, she has a higher tolerance for pain because she's a daughter of a wolf; she heals faster than an average human, any child that she will have with Peter will get stronger than their parents because of their uninterrupted heritage.
Vero Diaz chapter 2 . 1/5/2012
wheres the new chapter?
samcheese1 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
continue!
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