Reviews for Eye of the Beholder
twimima7 chapter 28 . 6/12
Can they ever catch a break? Sad for them but Bella is right and needs to do it for their sake and his family too.
twimima7 chapter 16 . 6/12
Awesome chapter and you made my day thank you. Good writing.
twimima7 chapter 9 . 6/12
Your story has me in tears already, it's a good story and I'm in tears for Bella and Edward.
Guest chapter 40 . 4/14
Great story
Guest chapter 17 . 3/31
The pregnancy of alice and bella shows how the world works for the fortunate and the less.
Kudos to you for thinking of this.
sueIZide chapter 40 . 9/11/2015
This whole journey was an unexpected, pleasant surprise.
sueIZide chapter 26 . 9/10/2015
Despite Bella's "profession" she has a child like innocence about her.
sueIZide chapter 16 . 9/10/2015
You just keep surprising me. I wondered how she would find out the baby was Edwards?
sueIZide chapter 10 . 9/10/2015
This is just full of surprises.
sueIZide chapter 9 . 9/10/2015
I didn't see this happening. Nice twist.
James must've known something about Bella's past.
sueIZide chapter 8 . 9/10/2015
He's going to be traumatized when he finds out what they did. If they think he was shy and had no trust before? Look out. He's going to think it was a cruel joke.
sueIZide chapter 6 . 9/9/2015
I'm very pissed at Alice & Rose. He's going to be more than hurt. They're going to loose his trust.
sueIZide chapter 5 . 9/9/2015
Maybe Alice and Rose's intentions were good but I think it was rather selfish of them. When he finds out, it's going to be devastating for him.
sueIZide chapter 3 . 9/5/2015
I was way off base. I thought she was maybe an undercover officer.
sueIZide chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
Too funny.
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