|Reviews for Unwanted Fate|
| Queen.Violet chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
You wrote a BMF fic! This made my day, along with your other updates! 8D
Anyway, I think, I will review as I go! ;D
Hehe, cutesy 'Taro, sometimes you HAVE to go up against fate, you know.
LOL OMG, I seriously had to stop reading and laugh for, like, eight months after seeing what Ryuga wanted with Tobio. XD Oh, Tobio! Tomorrow, Ryuga wants your help hiding some more bodies, they're really unconscious, trust me, they're still alive, I promise, even if they sort of don't seem to be actually breathing. xD
And, all of your interaction between Tobio and Ryutaro is just so amazing and lovely I don't even... Keep trying, 'Taro 'Taro, Tobio HAS to believe you eventually. Maybe. ...Possibly.
...There is something very cute about Ryutaro just following and watching and waiting to drag him away. I don't know what it is. xD
AAWWWWW, 'TARO'S CURL IS BLOWING. X3 Gaaahh so bizarrely cute. x3 Lol, Ryutaro, your freakiness is distracting, please stop it. xD
Ahh, from that point on I absolutely couldn't concentrate on a review at the same time as reading, so I finished it and ZOMG it was amazing. xD
It's just so...cute. This fic is absolutely loveable. XD I'm finding it hard to comment on the second half because it is so awesome. _ I especially enjoy how Ryutaro just keeps walking. Probably knew that it was the only way to get Tobio to follow him. :D
Anyhow, I love love love this fic, and it is amazing, and you are amazing, and yeah! * glomps 'Livvy and her fic *
| Minty Lynni chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
I've already told you I loved this! BTW, It's me, Lynni-Kun!
| Illusion fox chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Wow, this is great! You must have been working very hard for the last month!
| beccl47 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
you inspired with this story keep writing these wonderful stories :D Beccal47
| Citation1948 chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Oh hey, I've been forgetting to review the rest of your stuff, so I come to do so and I see a new story! xD
This is cute. :3 Haha, stubborn Tobio is stubborn. And it figures he wouldn't believe Ryutaro about fate. XD They're both in character here, which is always great! :D Oh, and I love that metaphor near the end. But I always love metaphors. 3
You did well. ;)