|Reviews for The Next Chapter: Kelpie's Trap|
| violet167 chapter 5 . 3/6
I know its been long but can you please continue this story. pm me if you will or not. I have always loved it!
| NightlyRowenTree chapter 5 . 10/15/2015
I love kelpie thanks for the chapter
| Esmereilda chapter 5 . 9/7/2015
I do hope you update this fic at some point in the near future cuz it is really getting interesting and I wanna know just what kelpie's cousin is scheming
| Esmereilda chapter 4 . 9/6/2015
edgar is too blind to see that she isn't in love with him and as long as his eyes are clouded by the past he never will XD
| Esmereilda chapter 3 . 9/6/2015
probs if edgar tricks kelpie in to eating liver b4 hand XD
| Esmereilda chapter 2 . 9/6/2015
*pouts* there aren't enough kelpie/Lydia fics T_T but I'm liking where ur going with this one
| Esmereilda chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
i guess that depends on which he likes less his cousin or the earl XD
| im ur misconception chapter 5 . 7/22/2015
I am so glad that you were finally able to update. I realize that Real Life can be a heavy ball and chain, keeping us from what we love to do. It is currently taking it's toll on me.
But, I did really enjoy this update. The verbal sparring was cute and funny, with everyone's little interjections to Kelpie and Edgar. I mean how can you now giggle at the thoughts or actual voicing of their thoughts.
BTW, I don't know if you have had a chance to read my Earl and Fairy... Drunk Confessions... I did a RavenXLydia.
| animelovernewbie chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
Cool story. It really gets you wondering what's going to happen next. You also have the characters personalities as they were in the original story. I applaude you. Can't wait till the next chapter. :)
| LovelyDream chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
Please update. I lice how you're doing R aven's character. :)
| im ur misconception chapter 4 . 2/6/2013
This is a interesting take on the after part for the series. I like where you are going, and annette for a OC is fun. I can not wait to see what mischief she will inact on the crew.
| CeruleanDreamCat chapter 4 . 1/28/2013
I think you did a good job with Edgar this chapter.
| Nusuki Kisuuke chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
Wow. You're writing style is really progressing. :) And the attention to characters other than the pairing makes it much more believable. Also, I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! Yay. :D This story is really great. I cant wait for the next chapter. (Btw the same problem with updating continuously, but I too REFUSE to drop Any of my stories). Great chapter, keep it up. :D
| Yousei chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
Please update! This is crazy good! Its one of the best hakushaku to Yousei fanfics out there. PLEASE don't quit writing this!
| Brownie chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
Please update. Its been way too long.