Reviews for Don't change
Jane Doe51 chapter 11 . 12/29/2013
'For as much Anthony and Amanda have consented together...'
What ? Wasn't it David & Kristen ? *confused*

Okay, so, you got me...at first, I was happy because I was thinking Jane & Lisbon was getting married. Then I sensed that something was off, that the decorations and flowers were not Lisbon-like (I could imagine Jane humour her but I can't see Lisbon having a girly wedding...see what I mean ?) so I was somewhat relieved that it wasn't theirs, even of I felt cheated...but with Lisbon's life-changing news, I understood that a Jisbon baby was on its way and it made me so, so happy ! The perfect ending to this very enjoyable story ! Jisbon feels...feel so right !
Jane Doe51 chapter 10 . 12/29/2013
Awww...they're so cute...they way they both feel so insecure, wondering about the other's feelings (is he hurt ? is she mad ? will I be forgiven ?) is so touching...but they finally found their way to each other ! I can't never get enough of Jane & Lisbon kissing, really ! A wonderful chapter !
Jane Doe51 chapter 9 . 12/29/2013
Yay ! She did it ! She told him ! And he understood...now they're free to go their separate ways ! Yay, yay, yay !
Jane Doe51 chapter 8 . 12/29/2013
So...more kisses and more confusion for Teresa...as much as she's searching for comfort in David's arms, her confusion is leading to nightmares hinting at her utter fear to lose Jane...interesting...Ultimately, while David is a good guy, he's not the one her heart wants...she just have to admit it to herself...and to him.
Jane Doe51 chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
So...while David is planning a week-end with her, Jane is seemingly up to something...he understood how afraid she was. Afraid of her own feelings, of what they mean. She really has to sort things out...
Jane Doe51 chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
Another kiss...seems like they can't keep their hands (and thoughts...and lips...) off of each other...Lisbon is really in deep trouble...how is she gonna solve the predicament she's in ?
Jane Doe51 chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
Wow ! I never expected Jane to be thisstraightforward, this forthcoming with Lisbon. But now she knows how he feels, knows that David's assumption is correct. And she knows she's ambivalent...She let him kiss her...she kissed him back, started to unbotton his vest...while she stopped them from...doing more, because she doesn't want to cheat on David, she can't ignore her feeling anymore. She didn't do more, but she wanted to...
This is a messy situation !
Jane Doe51 chapter 4 . 12/29/2013
'I would never make her change'
With that, David now knows that he has a rival for Teresa's affection...This sentence is a dead give away of Jane's jealousy...But he should know better than to confront David...when he just made it up to Lisbon about this changing thing. He should he can't expect that level of understanding from anyone else but Lisbon. Now he has hurt her. is he gonna do to make it better ?

Funny that David loves in Lisbon what Jane values so much : her honesty, her inability to lie, her truthfulness...
Jane Doe51 chapter 3 . 12/29/2013
So...Lisbon decides not to wear make-up in the morning because it doesn't feel like her but she finds herself unable to stay true to her decision...to herself, when David proposes to have dinner. He really is the reason why she does this. And while it's normal to want to be prettier for your boyfriend, she shouldn't do something she feels is not like herself (in particular when Canon Lisbon wasn't really wearing make-up when you wrote this...she was just starting looking more feminine)...

So I take it Jane and David are having a talk...Considering they get on each other's nerves, how is it going ?
Jane Doe51 chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
Outch ! They both hurt each other...this is incredibly sad...What can come out of this complex situation ?
It's a shame that it takes so much hurt for the old Lisbon to resurface...but at least, she's still there...
She claimed not to be a broken mess anymore...but for her to imply that her best friend is just that...doesn't it mean she still is ? Is that the reason she's not as close to him as he was ? Because it makes her feel like a broken mess ? While she is a vulnerable person, she's mostly someone who is able to make something beautiful out of her brokeness...she shouldn't lose her selflessness in her way to happiness.
Jane Doe51 chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Awww...having Lisbon answering the question about her week-end by 'David and I' hurts !
Interesting, though, that David is 'kind of like' Jane...Lisbon should have the real deal...
So, Lisbon has changed...apart from the jealousy, I guess what's hard for Jane is that she's not that predictable anymore, he doesn't seem able to have a proper read on her any longer...that must be quite disturbing...
GyMusicAddict chapter 11 . 8/30/2012
Oh yay! Everything worked out and now they're a family! Too cute and just the right amount of angst. :)
Special Agent Baker chapter 11 . 1/6/2012
Cute story. Jealous Jane can be really funny and sexy. Special Agent Baker.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/22/2011
omb i wanna marry this story its got me in hysterics! SQUEL puuurrttyyy plzzzzz!

-jazz
Totorsg chapter 11 . 11/13/2011
this epilogue is amazing !

it was beautiful

and lisbon is pregnant \o/

thanks for this great story :)
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