Reviews for Human
Guest chapter 15 . 12/19/2016
I need more of this, it is so good.
DBNY94 chapter 4 . 11/7/2016
This is SUCH a good premise, which is why I'm so sad that you seem to have no grasp of grammar or sentence structure. You need a beta, because reading this is like trying to understand someone who is speaking a second language. Badly.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/29/2016
Danny:*sitting on bed crying*
Guest:Its alright Danny's *hugging him and comforting him*shh shh its alright we're here shh shh *whispers to the trio*you guys go ahead and wait for me
Sam,tucker and jazz:(in jazz's room)*face filled with anger maddie had it now no one makes danny cry*
Sam:*taking deep breaths*dont kill her ,dont kill her ,*deep breaths*shes still dannys mother
Jazz:*pacing back and forth the room mumbling to herself*(tucker could hear "mother"," not to murder","help","care" and "danny")
Tucker:*thinking about something guest told him*
Guest:*comes in*I'm gonna take a shower*looking sad*Danny's asleep but he cried so much my shoulders wet not that I mind he needed to let it out*the trio surprised how can guest be so calm**spare cloths come out of nowhere in guests hand*be right back
With trio ten minutes later
Guest:now*now says calmly until*WHAT THE HECK WAS SHE THINKING THAT WITCH (after what looked like hours of cussing)...*takes a deep breath*now tucker please do the owners
Tucker:well guest told me that if theres a way we could turn Danny"normal"*the other two brighten up*and yes there 's the plan...
In the living room
Maddie:hey kids phantom's human now isn't that gr-
Guest:*slaps Maddie hard*YOU ARE RESPONSIBILE FOR THIS YOU ARE SO SELF CENTERED THAT YOU DIDNT EVEN NOTICED THE PAIN IN HIS EYES YOU YOU...URG
Maddie:but listen h-
Guest :NOT ANOTHER WORD YOU WITCH *takes the gun(the one that makes ghost human)*TUCKER
tucker:*takes the gun from guest*on it
Maddie:what are yo-
Sam:SHUT UP YOU ARE SO SELFISH YOU DIDNT EVEN NOTICE THAT YOU WERE HURTING HIM YOU DISGUST ME FIRST YOU MAKE INVENTIONS THAT SHOULDNT BE MADE*the trio (jazz ,guest,tucker)didn't liked where this was going*THEN YOU MADE STUPID GHOST PORTAL ,YOU KNOW YOU NEVER PAYED ATTENTION TO YOUR KIDS BUT STILL THEY CARED ABOUT YOU
guest:umm Sam I think you should st-
Sam:DANNY WAS SO SAD THAT HE EVEN WENT TO CHECK THE PORTAL FOR YOU HE WENT TO FIND THE ON BUTTON IT WAS INSIDE THE PORTAL YOU IDIOTS HOW DUMB CAN A PERSON BE!*realizing where this was going the duo(guest and jazz tucker is busy on the gun)took action jazz butted in and guest put a hand on Sams mouth just long enough for her to understand)
Jazz:HE HAD TO TAKE OUT THE ELECTRICITY THEN GO IN PRESS THE BUTTON AND TURN THE ELECTRICITY ON AGAIN BUT GOT SHOCKED WHEN HE TURNED THE ELECTRICITY ON BECAUSE OF SOME LOOSE WIRES(it wasn't entirely a lie)THANK GOD IT WAS MINOR OR ELSE HE WOULD HAVE-
tucker:GOT IT!*while jumping with joy gun in hand"let's go
Maddie:*who was shocked up until now* and where do you think your going ?
Tucker, jazz, Sam, guest:TO SET THINGS RIGHT*and with that they stomped away towards Danny's room*
Maddie:*started to piece everything together then remembering the pain in Danny's eye's*what have I done
Mean while with Danny
Guest:Danny,sweety wake up*says in a clam soothing tone* (Danny's like a little brother to guest just so you know)
Danny's:five...more...minutes mom
Guest:Danny its me not your mom*still calm soothing tone*
Danny:*wakes up hurriedly with a blush on face * sorry
Guest:its ok *danny puts his head on guests shoulder while guest brushes fingers through Danny's hair*we have something to tell you
The trio (Sam,tucker,jazz)snaps out of of the heart warming scene there hearts were melted into
Sam:we found a way to make you back to normal
Jazz:little brother y-hey I wanna hug my brother too guest
Guest:not a chance *jazz pouts while guest sticks out tongue *
Tucker:*clears throat* anyways bro are you ready
Danny:*stands up with help of guest*yes
Guest:*steps away*
Tucker:*presses the trigger*
Light comes out of it and hits Danny after its gone
Danny:*whispers*please work,please work please work *guest puts encouraging hand on his shoulder*here goes nothing goin'ghost *and with two familiar rings surround Danny and move in opposite direction**Danny's face lits up tackles everyone to ground except sam*thank you thank you thank you so much now I can protect everyone again
Sam:*looks disappointed*
Danny:*after helping others up**walks to Sam**hugs her*thank you Sam
Sam:*brightens*your welcome
Guest ,jazz,tucker:*mutters under breath* love birds
Danny:*breaks the hug**flies out the window does his loop de loops and come back*thank you once again everyone
Everyone in the room except danny :*smiles at him everyone loves to see danny happy*
Guest:*looks at the time*well I gotta go now
Everyone except guest: do you have to go ?
Guest:*hugs jazz*don't worry I will visit later and besides you don't have to worry about me being more of a sibling to Danny then you *jazz smiles* *give tucker a high five*oh and mister techno geek take care of those two love birds *danny and Sam :*crimson red*WE ARE NOT LOVEBIRDS*and jazz *ruffles sad looking Danny's hair*dont worry I will be visiting,you aren't getting rid of me anytime soon
Jazz, danny, Sam, tucker:never plan to *cue chuckles*
Guest:*finally hugs Sam**whispers*take care of him my future sister-in-law *cue blushing from sam *
Sam:*breaks the hug*I will
With that guest takes leave
Guest chapter 9 . 9/29/2016
Danny:*sitting on bed crying*
Guest:Its alright Danny's *hugging him and comforting him*shh shh its alright we're here shh shh *whispers to the trio*you guys go ahead and wait for me
Sam,tucker and jazz:(in jazz's room)*face filled with anger maddie had it now no one makes danny cry*
Sam:*taking deep breaths*dont kill her ,dont kill her ,*deep breaths*shes still dannys mother
Jazz:*pacing back and forth the room mumbling to herself*(tucker could hear "mother"," not to murder","help","care" and "danny")
Tucker:*thinking about something guest told him*
Guest:*comes in*I'm gonna take a shower*looking sad*Danny's sleep but he cried so much my shoulders wet not that I ming he need to let it out*the trio surprised how can guest be so calm**spare cloths come out of nowhere in guests hand*be right back
With trio ten minutes later
Guest:now WHAT THE HECK WAS SHE THINKING THAT WITCH (after what looked like hours of curseing)...*takes a deep breath*now tucker please do the owners
Tucker:well guest told me that if theres a way we could turn Danny's " normal"*the other two brighten up*and yes there is here's the plan...
In the living room
Maddie:hey kids phantom's human now isn't that gr-
Guest:*slaps Maddie hard*YOU ARE RESPONSIBILE FOR THIS YOU ARE SO SELF CENTERED THAT YOU DIDNT EVEN NOTICED THE PAIN IN HIS EYES YOU YOU...URG
Maddie:but listen h-
Guest :NOT ANOTHER WORD YOU WITCH *takes the gun(the one that makes ghost human)*TUCKER
tucker:*takes the gun from guest*on it
Maddie:what are yo-
Sam:SHUT UP YOU ARE SO SELFISH YOU DIDNT EVEN NOTICE THAT YOU WERE HURTING HIM YOU DISGUST ME FIRST YOU MAKE INVENTIONS THAT SHOULDNT BE MADE*the trio (jazz ,guest,tucker)didn't like where this is going)*THEN YOU MADE STUPID GHOST PORTAL YOU KNOW YOU NEVER PAYED ATTENTION TO YOUR KIDS BUT STILL THEY CARED ABOUT YOU
guest:umm Sam I think you should st-
Sam:DANNY WAS SO SAD THAT HE EVEN WENT TO CHECK THE PORTAL FOR YOU HE WENT TO FIND THE ON BUTTON IT WAS INSIDE THE PORTAL YOU IDIOTS HOW DUMB CAN A PERSON BE!*realizing where this was going the duo(guest and jazz tucker is busy on the gun)took action jazz butted in and guest put a hand on Sam hand just long enough for her to understand)
Jazz:HE HAD TO TAKE OUT THE ELECCTRICITY THEN GO IN PRESS THE BUTRON AND TURN THE ELECTRICITY ON AGAIN BUT GOT SHOCKED WHEN HE TURNED THE ELECTRICITY ON BECAUSE OF SOME LOOSE WIRES(it wasn't entirely a lie)THANK GOT IT WAS MINOR OR ELSE HE WOULD HAVE-
tucker:GOT IT!*while jumping with joy gun in hand"let's go
Maddie:*who was shocked up until now* and where do you think your going
Tucker jazz Sam guest:TO SET THINGS RIGHT*and with that they stomped away towards Danny's room*
Maddie:*started to piece everything together then remembering the pain in Danny's eye's*what have I done
Mean while with Danny's
Guest:Danny sweety wake up (Danny's like a little brother to guest just so you know)
Danny's:five...more...minutes mom
Guest:Danny its me not your mom
Danny:*wakes up hurriedly with a blush on face * sorry
Guest:its ok *danny puts his head on guests shoulder while guest brushes fingers through Danny's hair*we have something to tell you
The trio (you know)snaps out of of the heart warming scene there hearts were melted into
Sam:we found a way to make you back to normal
Jazz:little brother y-hey I wanna hug my brother too guest
Guest:not a chance *jazz pouts while guest sticks out tongue *
Tucker:*clears throat* anyways bro are you ready
Danny:*stands up with help of guest*yes
Guest:*steps away*
Tucker:*presses the trigger*
Light comes out of it and hits Danny's after it gone
Danny:*whispers*please... Work,please work please work *guest puts encouraging hand on his shoulder*here goes nothing goin'ghost *and with two familiar rings surround Danny and move in opposite direction**Danny's face lits up tackles everyone to ground except sam*thank you thank you thank you so much now I can protect everyone again
Sam:*looks disappointed*
Danny:*after helping others up**walks to Sam**hugs her*thank you Sam
Sam:*brightens*your welcome
Guest ,jazz,tucker:*mutters under breath* love birds
Danny:*breaks the hug**flies out the window does his loop de loops and come back*thank you once again everyone
Everyone in the room except danny :*smiles at him everyone loves to see fanny happy*
Guest:*looks at the time*well I gotta go now
Everyone except guest: do you have to go ?
Guest:*hugs jazz*don't worry I will visit later and besides you don't have to worry about me being more of a sibling to Danny's then you *jazz smiles* *give tucker a high five*oh and mister techno geek take care of those two love birds(danny and Sam :*crimson red*WE ARE NOT LOVEBIRDS)and jazz *patts sad looking Danny's head*dont worry I will be visiting you aren't getting rid of me anytime soon
Jazz danny Sam tucker:never plan too *cue chuckles*
Guest:*finally hugs Sam**whispers*take care of him my future sister-in-law *cue blushing from sam *
Sam:*breaks the hug*I will
With that guest takes leave
Krista Perry chapter 15 . 9/15/2016
Oh, such a great story. I hope life is treating you well enough that you'll be able to post the next chapter soon. Last chapter you mentioned you need a beta reader. If you still do, I volunteer!

Thanks for writing and sharing! :)
Jessica chapter 15 . 7/31/2016
We already know from the evil future Danny, that things aren't set in stone. So please find a way to return Danny back to normal. PLEASE!
GhostGirl221 chapter 12 . 7/20/2016
Amazing redemption bit for Val. It's about time those two cleared the air. (Glad she was able to figure it out on her own, she's a smart cookie.)
GhostGirl221 chapter 11 . 7/20/2016
AHGGG I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! FOUR MORE CHAPTERS TO GO BUT AUGH I LIVE FOR ANGSTY DANNY. GOOD JOB.
Ryuu842 chapter 15 . 6/19/2016
Please update soon!
gwencarson126 chapter 15 . 5/29/2016
DONT STOP KEEP ON GOING CAN NOT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER
gwencarson126 chapter 8 . 5/29/2016
WWHHHATTTT ! DANNY PHANTOM IS GOING TO DIE?
Come on bring back the good old danny Fenton/phantom
hope you keep going
love this fanfiction
Frostbite711 chapter 15 . 4/24/2016
Really good!
I would have to say that when he's talking about his parents as their names, you should make them capital. When saying "my mom" or "my dad" you don't need capitals.
the-darker-side-of-things chapter 15 . 4/16/2016
Holy crap, Im so hooked
Wilona Riva chapter 15 . 4/1/2016
Getting intense.
memories.of.rain chapter 15 . 3/29/2016
I'm glad that Jack and Maddie accepted that Danny is part ghost. You left this at such a cliffhanger! *gives you a plate of cookies and a glass of milk* AMAZING JOB! I hope you write more soon! :D
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