|Reviews for Carrie White: Yearning to belong|
| seth chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Not bad, when are you writing father?
| America Liberty chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
I actually think I feel bad for Chris in this story which is rare but good. You added sympathy from both angles. Good job! Your technical writing could use some work, however. Vary word choices a bit and maybe show don't tell.
| horrorfreak101 chapter 7 . 10/23/2011
Loving this so far! You have the characters to a tee, and carrie and tommy are so cute together I can actually picture this happening love it! :)
| James Birdsong chapter 7 . 10/3/2011
Awesome seven chapters
| LordofVoid chapter 7 . 10/1/2011
This one was better than your other chapters just because Carrie is finally with a friend.
Keep it up!
| LordofVoid chapter 6 . 9/27/2011
"Finally" is right; the two are idiots.
Keep writing, the fight was cool, but Carrie could've used her powers.
| LordofVoid chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
Wow, you write fast!
Glad Tommy showed up, kinda missed the guy.
Alright, a fight scene! This oughta be good!
| LordofVoid chapter 4 . 9/26/2011
Hell Yeah! The bitch is DEAD!
| LordofVoid chapter 3 . 9/26/2011
Now it's gettin' good!
Gotta wonder, though; why would Carrie be attracted to a dude who beats his girlfriend?
| LordofVoid chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
That wasn't too long at all.
I love the drama that you put into this. I can't wait to see how Chris reacts when Billy dumps her. (At least I hope he dumps her.)
Give this one a happy ending too; I always feel bad for Carrie in these things.
Waitin' on the third! Can't wait!
| LordofVoid chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
This is great so far! I want more!
Mainly becuase I don't get how Billy and Carrie would get together.