Reviews for Salvation
KRASHkoehn chapter 10 . 2/28/2014
Love this story! Cant wait till the next chapter comes out! :)
chalintrinity69 chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
I'm seriously trying to figure out who the boy was...
firetalon90 chapter 10 . 1/6/2014
Cant wait I was really getting into this one
XxXTinamoiXxX chapter 10 . 1/4/2014
Yay, an update! Pleeeeeeeease post a chapter soon, you're a really good writer! :3
RaiiderBaybe93 chapter 9 . 11/2/2013
Please Update Soon!
Pumk chapter 9 . 9/4/2013
Updatee...
nekogirl017 chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
...you haven't updated this year...Or since November 25 2012! Update! You can't just let wes almost rape maka and not update!
Catrine chapter 9 . 6/5/2013
Looks like Wes is going to be the bad guy again ;)
Nah just joking.
Joke aside I love how you started the story with a lot of questions attached for us reader. Yes there's a LOT of questions asked but in the end the skies became clear. Thank you for that.
I hope you update soon.
It sad if you're not gonna continue such a perfectly composed fic.
AngelFromTheLost chapter 9 . 5/8/2013
Oh Drama... :P Hahaha It's really good so far so KEEP WRITTING :D
lemon-moon chapter 9 . 5/6/2013
?Wow you sure haven't updated in forever, did you lose inspiration?
Guest chapter 5 . 4/30/2013
:-*
Guest chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
Their past so sad.:'(
Guest chapter 3 . 4/30/2013
I'm a little lost for a bit. But nice story.
Seriously-questionmarkhere chapter 9 . 4/28/2013
This is awesome! I dug it out from old-good stories and it urned out to be amazing!
I loved how they're relationship developed during the chapters, like at Chapter 5 I tough that it will take forever for them to get closer, But yet, I stayed incorrect :P They became close quickly, yet it wasn't 'sharp' it was transitioned smoothly and nicely, it all made sense! So yeah, I bet lots of people would say that you did an amazing job C:
And now About the chapter, it was really interesting to read about the characters, the thing Wes was really surprising, I mean lot's of people put Wes as a bad guy, so that kind of think is usually expected, but you really surprised me, and exceptionally when Was confessed that he never gets that things he wants, and now Maka is going to be one thing he Will get, it was really intriguing. And when Maka runs away to Souls room, the situation very well shows the growing bond between those two, that part part was really nice! (Well besides Wes trying to rape Maka :I)
Your story is amazing, so please update soon! :3
Guest chapter 9 . 3/28/2013
i really love your story and how its going im not signed in right now but my user name is:kyle broflovski is my name thats the full user name
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