God its been years yet i still hope and wait for this fic to get updated again. i hope you come and update someday .

if it is a one sided crush, then she is not part of the harem. to be part of the harem, she has to be PART of the harem. that includes all the icky bits.

having a crush is not the same as being part of the harem.

harem members are romantically involved. completely involved.

so if wendy simply has a crush on natsu? then she is not a harem member. she is an outlier with a crush.

It’s forbidden black magic but…if it is, then shouldn’t it have horrible consequences? Like Zeref’s curse.

Chapter 28 hype

Mmm... Just not capturing the "back in time" bit well, or at all really. You're being to vague about Natsu's new strength too. Should've actually wrote the fight between Natsu and Makarov. Then wrote everyone's general reaction to he tremors afterwards. The lazy way just didn't look right. Anyways. Turned off now...

Alright... I was sure I wasn't the only one to squint their eyes and tilt their head reading "Wendy" in the harem list. Cool that is cleared up.

I will say though, I think something is wrong with this but I don't really know what yet.

... Wendy is in this harem? Mmm. How old is that CHILD again? Seeing her name threw me all the way off.

Wow, this seems good!

good chapter!

good chapter!

men I wish it wasn't harem fic .. demn I really hate those

Zeref can send Natsu back but not himself what a garbage story

I like it a lot, hope author didn't forget about it completely

juvia in minor harem is sad

say, forget this mess.