Reviews for Hatsu Kousou
Mirage chapter 10 . 11/6/2018
It was stupid of them in ch10 to buy auch a Kimono, they should have gone with male traveling simply clothing pants and top clothing... Not to be so bright and easy to see... Hair cut short and some headwear some mud in the clothing and Facebook, coloring of the Hair too and nobody would look twice just a samurai and bis son.
Lily chapter 15 . 7/28/2018
Alternative Ending:
While still on boat Akihito dies from his wound festering, Asami can’t take the loss and slowly withers away (highly unlikely but one can imagine XD).

They reincarnate as the lovely couple we know of today XD I love to depress myself QvQ
soyoraite chapter 13 . 12/8/2015
Hahaha 10 on the richer scale! XD
Jade Rojo chapter 15 . 7/20/2015
AWWEEEE I love it..

A shame you wouldnt want to continue one more chapter..

But this was extremely well writen, i loved the way you ambiented the story and described every little detail of those years..

Love it...
Jade Rojo chapter 9 . 7/19/2015
Feilong?! yoh?!.. is not Asami.. I just know it...
Jade Rojo chapter 8 . 7/19/2015
oh my God! This is the worst!
Jade Rojo chapter 7 . 7/19/2015
WOW .. drooling over here!
Jade Rojo chapter 5 . 7/19/2015
i wanted to cry..! poor Aki.. being left alone in that awful place where he is mistreated...

Asami.. what are you waiting to get him out of there _!?
Jade Rojo chapter 4 . 7/19/2015
FIUU. i thought Asami and Feilong will get mad with Aki ...
Jade Rojo chapter 2 . 7/19/2015
I just hope Feilong doesnt get mad to Aki ..because Asami changed his favorite... because he is the only one nice to him..
Jade Rojo chapter 1 . 7/19/2015
ohhh wow.. Feilong is Asami hooker !
Topaz Faye chapter 15 . 7/17/2015
Holy hell, this is just pure amazingness! Your description of Japan in the old days is very precise, the way you inform us of the characters' feelings and appearances is clever. You've got good plot too - which I don't usually see in authors with good ex scenes. I thoroughly enjoy every chapter and every turn of events you made. I love Asami, Akihito and Fei really much, and I'm glad how they turned out to be in your story. Keep writing! 3
StarElsie chapter 15 . 2/23/2015
Awww! I was hoping for more chapters
StarElsie chapter 14 . 2/23/2015
Dead bodies :O Sounds scary
StarElsie chapter 13 . 2/23/2015
I hope Asami would kill the Shogun and become the new Shogun
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