Reviews for Down The Line
bonz245 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Very good.
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 11/6/2011

Favorite line:

"As someone who was walking impaired, I had perfected the art of the tuck and roll."
Annie Lantus chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
So sweet story! :)
VampDog chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Awww, very sweet, and brings back some memories!
Amazone3 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Wow, I really thought he would break up, nice surprise! Awesome
kuntrygal chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Really enjoyd it!
LSidnee chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
I love this story... It's got everything I love about my fav 80's teen love stories, the awkward girl & the god like creature who she somehow manages to attract despite how they seem to be opposites at first glance. I really hope this turns into a full length story.
NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
This is so fantastic! :)
KimiD chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Whoa, you had me worried there for a moment when Edward was "backing off" and the abrupt goodbye before she went to Em's but all in all I floved this o/s Great fun and very nicely done.

bronzed topaz chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Dear Author:


This was a great cute, lighthearted read. I love happy endings and I'm a sucker for the popular and not so popular couple.

katmom chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Very cute!

Thanks for entering the contest!

Good luck!

lisamichelle17 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
This story was so perfect. I loved the 80's. The songs you picked was like totally awesome *winks* Good luck with the contest!
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Loved it
Jordanfan360 chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
this was good!

i'm not gonna lie, this line almost made me cry: As we walk into our house, I squeeze the hand of the man beside, smiling at the gray hairs threading through his temples and the lines around his green eyes.

i like the idea of growing old together :)
Fall In Perfection chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Wow! You're quite an impressive writer. Lovely job! }