Reviews for EroChikara
Wolfone10 chapter 1 . 5/3
Why on god's green earth... Would they exile the very one keeping the OTHER villages at bay? As much as they dislike the kyuubi, they CANNOT exile, execute, imprison their jinchuriki, they'd be FISH BAIT to the other villages that want nothing more then to turn the "hidden leaf" into the "hidden smear". OF ALL the villagers, naruto is the ONLY one that's indispensable... He's the only one that CAN'T be "gone"... Sasuke CAN (they had a whole clan of them and they weren't worth a toss to the other villages). But only ONE jinchuriki.
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lucky bastard
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labeled5150 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
pls make more chapters
Forsaken God chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Looking forward to your next chapter
DeactivatedAccount111 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
This is interesting. Lookin forward to your next chapter.
lou2003us chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Please update i love it LOL
Megadimension ForEver 01 chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Dude begging you to a Sasuke/Kushina story be like the first here hope you do
dragon ninja269 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
The lemon part was okay but it didn't flow right.

For example, when Yugao and Naruto were in one position then suddenly they were in a different room and position. At least explain how they went from one room to another or one position to the next position.
EndGame666 chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
can't say i've seen this take on a lemon fic before. realy hot and you do fairly well on the details.(not that i would know) need to work on your trasitions between positions as they are rather sudden/choppy. such as when he was getting a blow job(wich im not entierly sure if he got to finish) to eating her out; Yugao riding him to naruto being back on top; and going from there to when naruto postioned her by the tree. at one section you called naruto blair.
sambit chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
" ((Blair)) lifted himself on his arms but Yugao wasn't in a patient mood, she kept fucking herself on ((Blair's)) cock."

WTF are u substituting yourself there.!
Gin of the wicked smile chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
interesting! this story holds a lot of promise! also you need to reread this for errors
Takai153 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Nice start. I look forward to seeing how this will progress. The wording could be a bit smoother though. Still, great work. Send my appreciation to Shadow the Night of Chaos, I hope he'll update soon and you will translate it quickly. ;)
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