Reviews for Helter
squeakythe2nd chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
There's nothing wrong with your writing. A good insight into the character and Dr Peace's "Juggernaut bullets" were a nice touch. I'm sure you know this but when somebody is speaking you must start a new a paragraph. Otherwise everything just blends in.
CreedmasterNeo chapter 4 . 6/29/2013
PLEASE continue this!
Lain E chapter 4 . 3/2/2013
Um, Hello.

It's been a year since this had been updated and I love it so much. I can't just write a long review on this fic because I don't know what to say about it. I reeeeeally want you to continue so bad! :D Please do, I look forward to reading more. 3
CJL20115 chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
cool chapter update soon
CJL20115 chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
try to put some fight scenes in
CJL20115 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
cool story idea
deleteme00010 chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
i wonder if skelter will make an early appearance.
deleteme00010 chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Finaly a story about Helter, can't wait for more! Please update this soon man!