Oh darn...this was such an intriguing start! And the flow of the story so far was so smooth. Thanks for sharing this tidbit.

I think you should continue this story. I know it's been about...4 years since you started it but it's good! It has a great deal of potential

Dude, this story is sooooooo shui! Keep it up, i wanna know what's going on with the other super chick. write more!