Reviews for Making the Connection
Guest chapter 6 . 4/25
Oh my god. I didn’t understand half the words you were using, but I am trembling, that was.. wow!
AWhiterShadeOfHedgehog chapter 40 . 4/17
I really liked this story, but I can not understand why you left it without finishing it.
It's a very good and original story with very interesting character development, so I would really appreciate it if you would write at least a final chapter where they talk it out, instead of leaving us with this "in between " state of things.

Please?
deadbod1222 chapter 40 . 4/10
waaaaaaa! that's it? please! write more, this is so good. you cannot leave it like this. noooooo. please write more.
Valiance Leon chapter 40 . 6/12/2015
This has been really good. Are you ever going to finish?
sweetmarly chapter 40 . 4/7/2015
Hi there,

This wonderful story was the first I ever read on this website and I have been following it ever since the beginning. I have been so impressed with your writing style, dialogue, descriptions and the entire premise of this story. It would be a shame to leave it here. I have faved it and am following it so please, please, please consider finishing it.

Please!
CriimeKat chapter 40 . 11/7/2014
Please finish this! I adore this fic! It's very original, very well written and really interesting! I am dying to know how it finishes! Do you plan on ever updating or is the fic on hiatus? Either way I will be checking our your other fics for sure :) love your writing
seanaface chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
This is REALLY GOOD. I wish it was complete
Black-Luna chapter 40 . 9/30/2014
this story is getting interesting. update soon.
SakuraBlossom58 chapter 40 . 7/29/2014
I love this! Pleaase update soon, this is one of the best things I've read in a long time!
Ianto'sCoffeeMinion chapter 40 . 7/13/2014
Loved it! :D. This is definitely one of my fav Johnlock fics xxx
I.am.DivergentMortalWhovian chapter 40 . 7/9/2014
Oh. My. Gosh. That was just plain awesome. The connection between them in the first part of the story was great when they were talking on the phone. Then, the angst when they were "breaking up" was perfect! And now, the chesty between them has some anger but is still really nice! Then now, John sees the cut and the bruises on Sherlock's neck and also thinks of Su Lin's death, feeling very guilty. AND they are finally opening up! Oh, it's Christmas!:) I can't wait for your next update!
fireflirt911 chapter 40 . 6/20/2014
WHAT! How have you not finished the story?
shadowquill17 chapter 40 . 5/25/2014
What ? No next chapter ? Why did you stop ?
Well, anyway it way amazing. The phone smut was incredible (the falcon-man bit ? MAGNIFICENT) and the plot really interesting. It's a shame there won't be an ending though... but, thanks for those forty chapters, I guess ?
maliciouspixie5 chapter 40 . 4/21/2014
Amazing!
shunned-one chapter 40 . 3/31/2014
Is it finished? I'm so confused. Did they go thrOugh all of that for John to give up any pursue of relationship and then continue with the cannon events?
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