Reviews for Making the Connection
sweetmarly chapter 40 . 4/7
Hi there,

This wonderful story was the first I ever read on this website and I have been following it ever since the beginning. I have been so impressed with your writing style, dialogue, descriptions and the entire premise of this story. It would be a shame to leave it here. I have faved it and am following it so please, please, please consider finishing it.

Please!
CriimeKat chapter 40 . 11/7/2014
Please finish this! I adore this fic! It's very original, very well written and really interesting! I am dying to know how it finishes! Do you plan on ever updating or is the fic on hiatus? Either way I will be checking our your other fics for sure :) love your writing
seanaface chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
This is REALLY GOOD. I wish it was complete
Black-Luna chapter 40 . 9/30/2014
this story is getting interesting. update soon.
SakuraBlossom58 chapter 40 . 7/29/2014
I love this! Pleaase update soon, this is one of the best things I've read in a long time!
Ianto'sCoffeeMinion chapter 40 . 7/13/2014
Loved it! :D. This is definitely one of my fav Johnlock fics xxx
I.am.DivergentMortalWhovian chapter 40 . 7/9/2014
Oh. My. Gosh. That was just plain awesome. The connection between them in the first part of the story was great when they were talking on the phone. Then, the angst when they were "breaking up" was perfect! And now, the chesty between them has some anger but is still really nice! Then now, John sees the cut and the bruises on Sherlock's neck and also thinks of Su Lin's death, feeling very guilty. AND they are finally opening up! Oh, it's Christmas!:) I can't wait for your next update!
fireflirt911 chapter 40 . 6/20/2014
WHAT! How have you not finished the story?
shadowquill17 chapter 40 . 5/25/2014
What ? No next chapter ? Why did you stop ?
Well, anyway it way amazing. The phone smut was incredible (the falcon-man bit ? MAGNIFICENT) and the plot really interesting. It's a shame there won't be an ending though... but, thanks for those forty chapters, I guess ?
maliciouspixie5 chapter 40 . 4/21/2014
Amazing!
shunned-one chapter 40 . 3/31/2014
Is it finished? I'm so confused. Did they go thrOugh all of that for John to give up any pursue of relationship and then continue with the cannon events?
veronakiss chapter 40 . 3/31/2014
oh god i thought this was complete when i started reading, i really wanted the happy ending...i enjoyed it immensely so its sad its not completed. i would say on a personal note the phone sex chapters were brilliant, and then after sherlock was dissconnected it lost its way a bit, but the dialogue heavy parts were so so good at the beginning.
shunned-one chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
O dear... that is absolutely amazing
Suanne chapter 40 . 3/28/2014
When will the end come out? When John and Sherlock finnaly get their moment? I'm dying in anticipation!
Cheezewizz chapter 40 . 3/11/2014
Hey, I don't know if you have addressed this before but I want to say that I have one major problem with this fic: you describe everything that happened in canon. You do skip some things but for the most part I am reading your interpretation/skew of the original. I tend to read fan fiction because I know the canon really well already. I can't get enough of the characters and when you review everything that has already happened, you frustrate me. I get that you want to add sexual tension and make the original storyline fit with your fic but you could either skip the repeated scenes and add your own in between or skip this whole limbo state of their relationship.

Ok, all that aside, I really like your own plot. The first chapters with the phone sex were excellent (if somewhat outside of my own kink preference). Sherlock and John are really well characterized and john isn't hugely stupid and Sherlock isn't a complete child. I really like the logic and everything you have written seems plausible. I like your writing style and flow. I liked it enough that I read 100,000 words and enough that I hope you decide to update soon. I hope my critique doesn't bother you too much. Thanks for writing!
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