|Reviews for Bound|
| TheCommittee1 chapter 2 . 10/1/2011
a modern retelling of the LMI story, did you hear that big gun fucker. my man's story/ series Eterna was written to take place in the modern world. this is fanfiction, let no one tell you what to write or how to do it.
awesome chapter and excellent take on retelling the story. - the Staff
| BigFriendlyGun9000 chapter 2 . 9/27/2011
Why are you making a modern retelling of LMI? It was set in the 80s for a reason.
| TheCommittee1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Great first story, try not to dissapoint and abandon the story like some authors right yo. be original and dedicated and your story will stand out. watch out for haters on this section, people might not review your story simply because people they don't like already reviewed your story.
we'll try to review your chapters and give you honest critique, aigh. - The Staff
| The Tenderness 3.0 chapter 2 . 9/23/2011
i can already see the strong link to the movie which isn't original but not entirely boring, i liked that you kept certain phrases from the movie and made your character use it. oskar had a lash on his cheek, owen had a cut, and jace had a bruise...what will be thougt up next?
sucks you don't have s strong following right now, but it'll change, keep dem chapters coming. - L10
| The Tenderness 3.0 chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Story sounds promising, i like that you made abby sixteen, in my later stories she get's bumped up to fifteen by oskar. it feel's odd to leave out Owen but it is your story and no one should tell you how to do it differently.
looks like this jace character get's attached pretty quickly, hope he's ready for what he might find out. - L10