|Reviews for A Day of the Night|
| Theresa F chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I really like it so far, you made a few mistakes like starting out Lilith's' eyes being brown then you had them blue and when she first meets Abby you state a few sentences before it'd 9 at night but yet when were down in Abby's lab you have it seem like it is morning, just some small timeline errors.
Keep going with the story since I'm very intrigued in where this story could and will go from here!
| sparklesmart chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Love it! you should totaly continue!