Reviews for Labor Pains
Bene16 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Great , just great really! :D
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
That was sweet of Remus and Sirius :)
foreverpatron chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
absolutely hilarious. I love it XD
Norwegian girl chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
LOVE IT!:D so funny, and Sirius is soo amazing:D You're a great writer:D
JessandDarcy chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
This is absolutely HILARIOUS! 'i work for the ministry so I can apparate you directly out of your house'

I almost died laughing! It is so funny! Good job!
Paris chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Wow, I feel so so sorry for the hospital that had to deal with this awesomely crazy 'family'. I know if I worked there and had to watch these scenes and have to kick Sirius and Remus out, I'd be no help. Just be standing off to the side laughing my head off XD Hilarious work, great job!
flawsmadebeautiful chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
Very cute. Many arguments...
just.a.blue.jay chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Love it! Sirius and Remus are hysterical! Great story!
Onyx Nailo chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I just wanted to let you know that every time I read "Healer Keller" I read it as "Helen Keller" so i kept having to re-read lines...it was hilarious.
Sarah chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Usually when your having a baby the father isn't in the room the whole time because it gets... disgusting. The mother does a lot of pushing so just think about what else happens when you are pushing. Also you know you're going to have a baby when your water breaks, which basically means that water comes out of that place (trying not to be too desccriptive). I liked the story though... Remus and Sirius were very funny. My constructive critsism to you is to research the topic you are writing about more.
Sarah chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Usually when your having a baby the father isn't in the room the whole time because it gets... disgusting. The mother does a lot of pushing so just think about what else happens when you are pushing. Also you know you're going to have a baby when your water breaks, which basically means that water comes out of that place (trying not to be too desccriptive). I liked the story though... Remus and Sirius were very funny. My constructive critsism to you is to research the topic you are writing about more.
Goddess-of-Genius chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Awwwww, that was cute. And funny! Sirius and Remus were great. I spent 5 minutes laughing my head of. Great job!

Kind Regards, Gg
Lightfully chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
This Story, Was Making Me Literally Die Laughing At 2:30 A.M. I Blamed It On You, Of Course, But My Parents Wouldn't Believe Me. ANYWAYS, I Absolutely Adore & Love Your Story. .
Time Traveller xxx chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I'LL SEE YOU SOON HARRY UNCLE SIRIUS IS HERE!

omg so funny brilliant story :)
Me chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
:D Remus and Sirius were hiliarious! Couldn't stop laughing :)
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