Reviews for Spoiled
elixxxrangel chapter 24 . 4/27
Awesome story!
Ok! Thoughts!
1. Please dont kill me, but i wanted to choke miki out! God was she bossy and nosey! But she and piko were straight up cute!
2. I wanted Len to suck it in the begining haha but obi, he turned out to be worthy of Rin.
3. I loved Rin in this! She is so strong and sassy! People make he fawn at Lens feet so much in fics that it downgrades her. But in this, she is like "i like him, but im going to fret to obsession and get myself killed" she was realistic.
4. I loved how you made tei go yandere but did away with her in a good way instead of killing her or giving her something extreme.
Overall, awesome job. A few errors in grammer and spellling but easily looked past.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/24
Devious miku is best miku
Chiio Majesty chapter 24 . 3/26
Read everything in two days! :) So glad I actually fnished! Once again, I'm astounded at your plotting and emotions. Emotions, man. They're good.

*relieved sigh* Thank God Tei went away... I hope she finds love with someone who's like Yukiteru from Mirai Nikki XD XD /shot.

I'm glad Rin the winner tamed Len's spoiled rotten personality! It's about time fame's been taught a lesson! XD Good job though! I really enjoyed all the characters, especially Miki and Rei! Kyaaa! Rui, too. My favs. Also, I've always thought Miku was kinda weird being all bi-polar with Rin and stuff, but siiiigggh now I just feel for her. Poor thing. I think I can understand what it's like having your loved one stolen from you... well, not that I've ever thought of her as a bad BAD person, but argghhhhhggg why miku.

:) It's about high time since I've seen good works! Ever since OnigiRimi, Miko A. Kimura, Auntie Cliche retired, along with Aineshi and orangesky and alphaprincess0803 being gone, I've always felt that empty void in the Vocaloid section... seems it's finally being filled up again! Alas, I will miss those friends of mine. Such darling seniors they were to me... but soon, I shall pass the torch onto other great writers such as yourself.

Unless you're retiring FF as well...? Ah well, pass along the torch with me then! :)

Anyway, it's not everyday someone completes a story as good as yours! Really, it was a masterpiece! So you have my congratulations! I hope others thought this made a great story as well! Nah, I'm positive they do! WOO! Go asianchibi!

Anywho, I'm done ranting. I hope I didn't bother you with this much text. :) I have a bad tendency to rant and make long reviews. Sorry! On a final note, you're still awesome! Plus I loved your 2D Sunshine Girl! I hope your "Roommate" goes well, too!

Good luck! And thanks!
Gaby AKASailorV chapter 24 . 3/23
This story ended long ago I know but if the author is reading this. This was the best fanfiction I ever read and I read a lot of fanfiction your story gave me feels haha like really fluffy feels to really sad feels and I'm going to admit when I came to the end of this whole story I was crying because it was such a cute ending but also because I was sad that it ended but Thank You soo soo sooooo very much for writing this story the way you write explain everything is so perfect and this story was just muah :* perfection :D I fangirl a lot because of this story
okaygreenistheenemy chapter 24 . 3/22
Aww! I just started reading this story and it was so fun to read. You're a talented writer and I love the story and characters. Good job!
StaryEyedDreamer chapter 14 . 1/28
Ahhhhh, the fluff. It's cliche, but I can't wait to go to a festival in the evening while wearing a pretty pale pink sun dress with white bows, and a small white sweater that does nothing but cover my arms and look stylish and carry a small hot pink hand bag to keep my wallet in, all the while being all romantic and sharing my first kiss with the person I love, just as the ferris wheel reaches the top, and even though the veiw is simply stunningly breathtaking I ignore it because I am currently closing my eyes while being delicately kissed by my lover. Call it stupid, but I sincerly dream of that with all my heart. And besides, isn't that every girl's dream? If not, then at least most girls.
Best of luck with love to all,
StaryEyedDreamer
midnightwhispers27609 chapter 1 . 1/1
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
i just can't ... aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
You could make freakin' millions on this fic.
ckiedvhcuiygvdjcndkvlcj, i am officially at total LOSS for words.
YOU"RE.
SO.
GOOD.
LIKE, my whole Len/Rin relationship idea REVOLLLLVEEESS around this fanfic.
just keep doin what youre doin.
its just... didfuhvifuy.
Skaxis chapter 24 . 12/1/2014
Fantastic and very adorable.
Rinnamay chapter 24 . 10/10/2014
*squeal* ah god that was SO perfect... Thank you for making me stress through the 3 days it took me to read this about darn tei and rei
Seriously though. That was beautiful.
Iamthecookieninja chapter 24 . 9/11/2014
This is one of the best Rin and Len fan fictions I have ever read it's just so amazing like I can't even ...asdfghjkl.
But this is so good, I read all your others fanfics and they just can't compare to this one (not that they're bad!) but this one is just great. I can't give you any critisism because this is better than what I could ever write.
Great job!
The Chosen One chapter 24 . 9/7/2014
Lovely ending.
ShyHope chapter 24 . 7/15/2014
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

I hope you know I started this fanfic around 10pm and it's just turning 5 am now. Totally worth the journey. I love this fanfiction so much!
girl chapter 11 . 6/24/2014
Hey miki rin just admitted she piked ken...A LOT
Mimi02 chapter 15 . 5/17/2014
I love how you're one of the only authors of vocaloid who writes a lot in the story with over 100,000 words. Keep up the good work!
wtf chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
what in serious fuckery is this
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