|Reviews for Spoiled|
| khaled5559 chapter 24 . 2/12
ok let me be honest , i liked the story and the plot was pretty good and rin's personality was great but i absulutely HATED len in this one ,it felt like he got everything so easily and stupidly dense which made me want to kill myself , his character made me drop this great story
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/28/2017
Man, that ending right there gave me the giggles, geez no wonder why the title was that, love it!
| Shiota Akari chapter 24 . 5/19/2017
Nice one... I like it btw...
| Cannon28 chapter 24 . 3/20/2017
I am Jamie, a random reader exploring on vocaloid. I just want to say that i love your len x rin fanfictions! They're really incredible and I can't help but squeal and hop all around the house everytime I begin reading them...It's really amazing that you have the talent on writing and I just can't help but feel all giddy and excited all the time. I'm really inspired by your stories and the way you put life in them...it makes it even more better, heck, I think that this may be the best fictional story I've read yet! Then again, I'm still new in the world of vocaloid...
Anyway, thank you sooo much for making such a wonderful story, I'm feeling butterflies inside
And I'm also sorry that I didn't get to review from the past chapters...(I was too caught up in the story)0/0
If did get the time to read this dear author, thank you and I love you
| Guest chapter 24 . 5/12/2016
This story was absolute, 100%, per-fec-ion! I laughed, I cried, heck, I even squealed with my head stuffed in my pillow. I love this story so much, the flow was so natural, the plot was creative and unique and the result was beautiful! Thank you for this amazing story, you really are an incredible writer.
| buttpockets chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
oooh the middle school daysssss
| Lol chapter 14 . 7/23/2015
Hey tin are you falling for rei?
You know Len will be heartbroken because he loooooovvvvveeeeeessssss you
(I'm an idiot and I know it )I'm usually singing that in the shower
| Lol chapter 11 . 7/23/2015
Pfffffffffffffff like I listen too you.
Hey MIKI, RIN LIKES LEN A LOT
| Shadow chapter 24 . 6/18/2015
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY DIS IS OFFICIALLY DA BEST RINxLEN FANFIC THAT EVER EXISTEEEEEEDDDDDDD I LOVE YOOOUUUUUUU THANK YOU FOR MAKING UP MY DAYS HERE HAVE A FREE BRIOCHE YOU DESERVE IT
| a dust bunny chapter 22 . 6/17/2015
OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOOO SO HERE WE HAVE OUR RINNY GOING TO MEET HER FUTURE FATHER IN LAW (I think) YESSSSSSSSS THERE IS GOING TO BE DRAMA PEOPLE (Scar's Voice) BE PREPAREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
| a honeybadger chapter 16 . 6/12/2015
"It makes no sense,, for something as beautiful as love, to have such a painful entrance. Sometimes, it makes you wonder, how idiotically, about why the Rose who bears so many thorns, is the symbol of love."
AAAAAAAAAH QUOTE QUOTE QUOTE QUOTE QUOOOOOOOOOOOOOTEEEEEEEEEEEE
DAT IS AWSOME HERE GO HAVE 1.000.000 CHOCOLATE BARS YOU DESERVE IT
| Poodle chapter 2 . 5/31/2015
Len's attitude seems awfully familiar...oh yeah...my three-year old brother... *coughfeelyarin*
| MadamDork94 chapter 24 . 4/27/2015
1. Please dont kill me, but i wanted to choke miki out! God was she bossy and nosey! But she and piko were straight up cute!
2. I wanted Len to suck it in the begining haha but obi, he turned out to be worthy of Rin.
3. I loved Rin in this! She is so strong and sassy! People make he fawn at Lens feet so much in fics that it downgrades her. But in this, she is like "i like him, but im going to fret to obsession and get myself killed" she was realistic.
4. I loved how you made tei go yandere but did away with her in a good way instead of killing her or giving her something extreme.
Overall, awesome job. A few errors in grammer and spellling but easily looked past.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/24/2015
Devious miku is best miku
| ChiioMajesty chapter 24 . 3/26/2015
Read everything in two days! :) So glad I actually fnished! Once again, I'm astounded at your plotting and emotions. Emotions, man. They're good.
*relieved sigh* Thank God Tei went away... I hope she finds love with someone who's like Yukiteru from Mirai Nikki XD XD /shot.
I'm glad Rin the winner tamed Len's spoiled rotten personality! It's about time fame's been taught a lesson! XD Good job though! I really enjoyed all the characters, especially Miki and Rei! Kyaaa! Rui, too. My favs. Also, I've always thought Miku was kinda weird being all bi-polar with Rin and stuff, but siiiigggh now I just feel for her. Poor thing. I think I can understand what it's like having your loved one stolen from you... well, not that I've ever thought of her as a bad BAD person, but argghhhhhggg why miku.
:) It's about high time since I've seen good works! Ever since OnigiRimi, Miko A. Kimura, Auntie Cliche retired, along with Aineshi and orangesky and alphaprincess0803 being gone, I've always felt that empty void in the Vocaloid section... seems it's finally being filled up again! Alas, I will miss those friends of mine. Such darling seniors they were to me... but soon, I shall pass the torch onto other great writers such as yourself.
Unless you're retiring FF as well...? Ah well, pass along the torch with me then! :)
Anyway, it's not everyday someone completes a story as good as yours! Really, it was a masterpiece! So you have my congratulations! I hope others thought this made a great story as well! Nah, I'm positive they do! WOO! Go asianchibi!
Anywho, I'm done ranting. I hope I didn't bother you with this much text. :) I have a bad tendency to rant and make long reviews. Sorry! On a final note, you're still awesome! Plus I loved your 2D Sunshine Girl! I hope your "Roommate" goes well, too!
Good luck! And thanks!