|Reviews for Spoiled|
| Guest chapter 24 . 5/12/2016
This story was absolute, 100%, per-fec-ion! I laughed, I cried, heck, I even squealed with my head stuffed in my pillow. I love this story so much, the flow was so natural, the plot was creative and unique and the result was beautiful! Thank you for this amazing story, you really are an incredible writer.
| buttpockets chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
oooh the middle school daysssss
| Lol chapter 14 . 7/23/2015
Hey tin are you falling for rei?
You know Len will be heartbroken because he loooooovvvvveeeeeessssss you
(I'm an idiot and I know it )I'm usually singing that in the shower
| Lol chapter 11 . 7/23/2015
Pfffffffffffffff like I listen too you.
Hey MIKI, RIN LIKES LEN A LOT
| Shadow chapter 24 . 6/18/2015
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY DIS IS OFFICIALLY DA BEST RINxLEN FANFIC THAT EVER EXISTEEEEEEDDDDDDD I LOVE YOOOUUUUUUU THANK YOU FOR MAKING UP MY DAYS HERE HAVE A FREE BRIOCHE YOU DESERVE IT
| a dust bunny chapter 22 . 6/17/2015
OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOOO SO HERE WE HAVE OUR RINNY GOING TO MEET HER FUTURE FATHER IN LAW (I think) YESSSSSSSSS THERE IS GOING TO BE DRAMA PEOPLE (Scar's Voice) BE PREPAREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
| a honeybadger chapter 16 . 6/12/2015
"It makes no sense,, for something as beautiful as love, to have such a painful entrance. Sometimes, it makes you wonder, how idiotically, about why the Rose who bears so many thorns, is the symbol of love."
AAAAAAAAAH QUOTE QUOTE QUOTE QUOTE QUOOOOOOOOOOOOOTEEEEEEEEEEEE
DAT IS AWSOME HERE GO HAVE 1.000.000 CHOCOLATE BARS YOU DESERVE IT
| Poodle chapter 2 . 5/31/2015
Len's attitude seems awfully familiar...oh yeah...my three-year old brother... *coughfeelyarin*
| MadamDork94 chapter 24 . 4/27/2015
1. Please dont kill me, but i wanted to choke miki out! God was she bossy and nosey! But she and piko were straight up cute!
2. I wanted Len to suck it in the begining haha but obi, he turned out to be worthy of Rin.
3. I loved Rin in this! She is so strong and sassy! People make he fawn at Lens feet so much in fics that it downgrades her. But in this, she is like "i like him, but im going to fret to obsession and get myself killed" she was realistic.
4. I loved how you made tei go yandere but did away with her in a good way instead of killing her or giving her something extreme.
Overall, awesome job. A few errors in grammer and spellling but easily looked past.
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/24/2015
Devious miku is best miku
| ChiioMajesty chapter 24 . 3/26/2015
Read everything in two days! :) So glad I actually fnished! Once again, I'm astounded at your plotting and emotions. Emotions, man. They're good.
*relieved sigh* Thank God Tei went away... I hope she finds love with someone who's like Yukiteru from Mirai Nikki XD XD /shot.
I'm glad Rin the winner tamed Len's spoiled rotten personality! It's about time fame's been taught a lesson! XD Good job though! I really enjoyed all the characters, especially Miki and Rei! Kyaaa! Rui, too. My favs. Also, I've always thought Miku was kinda weird being all bi-polar with Rin and stuff, but siiiigggh now I just feel for her. Poor thing. I think I can understand what it's like having your loved one stolen from you... well, not that I've ever thought of her as a bad BAD person, but argghhhhhggg why miku.
:) It's about high time since I've seen good works! Ever since OnigiRimi, Miko A. Kimura, Auntie Cliche retired, along with Aineshi and orangesky and alphaprincess0803 being gone, I've always felt that empty void in the Vocaloid section... seems it's finally being filled up again! Alas, I will miss those friends of mine. Such darling seniors they were to me... but soon, I shall pass the torch onto other great writers such as yourself.
Unless you're retiring FF as well...? Ah well, pass along the torch with me then! :)
Anyway, it's not everyday someone completes a story as good as yours! Really, it was a masterpiece! So you have my congratulations! I hope others thought this made a great story as well! Nah, I'm positive they do! WOO! Go asianchibi!
Anywho, I'm done ranting. I hope I didn't bother you with this much text. :) I have a bad tendency to rant and make long reviews. Sorry! On a final note, you're still awesome! Plus I loved your 2D Sunshine Girl! I hope your "Roommate" goes well, too!
Good luck! And thanks!
| Gaby AKASailorV chapter 24 . 3/23/2015
This story ended long ago I know but if the author is reading this. This was the best fanfiction I ever read and I read a lot of fanfiction your story gave me feels haha like really fluffy feels to really sad feels and I'm going to admit when I came to the end of this whole story I was crying because it was such a cute ending but also because I was sad that it ended but Thank You soo soo sooooo very much for writing this story the way you write explain everything is so perfect and this story was just muah :* perfection :D I fangirl a lot because of this story
| okaygreenistheenemy chapter 24 . 3/22/2015
Aww! I just started reading this story and it was so fun to read. You're a talented writer and I love the story and characters. Good job!
| StaryEyedDreamer chapter 14 . 1/28/2015
Ahhhhh, the fluff. It's cliche, but I can't wait to go to a festival in the evening while wearing a pretty pale pink sun dress with white bows, and a small white sweater that does nothing but cover my arms and look stylish and carry a small hot pink hand bag to keep my wallet in, all the while being all romantic and sharing my first kiss with the person I love, just as the ferris wheel reaches the top, and even though the veiw is simply stunningly breathtaking I ignore it because I am currently closing my eyes while being delicately kissed by my lover. Call it stupid, but I sincerly dream of that with all my heart. And besides, isn't that every girl's dream? If not, then at least most girls.
Best of luck with love to all,
| midnightwhispers27609 chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
i just can't ... aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
You could make freakin' millions on this fic.
ckiedvhcuiygvdjcndkvlcj, i am officially at total LOSS for words.
LIKE, my whole Len/Rin relationship idea REVOLLLLVEEESS around this fanfic.
just keep doin what youre doin.
its just... didfuhvifuy.