|Reviews for Aresto Momentum|
| LostInYourThoughts chapter 18 . 11/10/2011
I knew it was coming, but for some reason I didn't think it would be Alex that Nott got ahold of.. Well update soon because I hate cliffys, and this is a major one. Great chapter!
| PhoenixPixie chapter 18 . 11/10/2011
I seriously wished I knew what the hell Alex was saying... and oh shit is he in trouble!
| LerDan chapter 18 . 11/10/2011
First: thnx to my sister for translating the french thing for moi.
2nd: AWESOME CHAPTER! Can't wait for the next one. I just hope you won't wait for another week and update! Please update as soon as you can. Because sometimes I forget what happened on last chapter.
PS: When are we going to have a Ted and Alex smut?
| Lollilollypopz chapter 17 . 11/9/2011
OHMYFUCKINGGOD! 'scuse ma french i loved this chapter! albus and fin are so cute!
When will the next chapter be up? you can't leave us on a cliffhanger like that? will the two bitches unite? arrrrrrrgh! :L I 3 your writing and i love your story-I'm 100% hooked ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter...the best harry potter fanfic I've ever read...which is saying alot as I read alot of them :D
| Lollilollypopz chapter 5 . 11/8/2011
I LOVE your writing guys-you have such a strong hold on the reader and even though i havent finished this one yet I know it will be great! I read the previous one and loved all the details you put into it (on that note loved the apple cover comment in this chapter...good to know where your support is ;) ) Hope you continue to write such good stories with excellent plot twists! :D xxx
| Alysisaacs17 chapter 17 . 11/8/2011
So whats going to happen with fins job? and who specificly went to the burrow?
| MyriadProBold chapter 5 . 11/7/2011
I really enjoyed the new storyline with Al and Victoire and Fin. Bailey is ick.
| ShawnBassett chapter 17 . 11/6/2011
To start, I don't usually read stories before they're completed. Considering I blasted through Wingardium Leviosa and now this, that's saying something :B
Scorpius and Hugo make me squee. Fin and Albus make me think of me and my love. I also have no clue how to pronounce Eoghan. I like fancy chocolates, too. Too bad the kind I get to eat don't explode...
Astoria's a bitch. I hope she burns. BURNS. I mean, who blackmails an 11-year old child? Obviously a nutbar with nothing better to do with her time, nor someone who could actually think of a real nasty plot.
Bailey ought to get hit by the Knight Bus. Regular buses don't run in wizarding London, or at least I don't think they do, so that rules out the regular death-by-public transit scenario that I'd have playing out. She's also bad at being the spurned ex. Works in Al's favour very well, at least :D
Anything about Rose? We've heard about Percy's kids, oh, and what about George and Angelina's? (If we're sticking to what Rowling laid out in the "epilogue", of course)
| domsijohn chapter 17 . 11/6/2011
albus in finnt yeah and i do hope that bailey and astoria and kmot die
| a French reader chapter 13 . 11/6/2011
Ohhh it's so cuuute 3
| PageNotFound404 chapter 17 . 11/5/2011
Long wait, but it was definitely worth it. :)
Oh, and I want to ask Albus: What did you see in Bailey in the first place?
And Scorpious, Why would you let Astoria take money from you?
And can someone please tell me what is it with Malfoy-Potters and women? xD
| a French reader chapter 11 . 11/5/2011
I love the relationship between Teddy and Alek, it's so cute!
A few notes: Alex would say "S'il te plaît" instead of "s'il vous plait" because he knows Teddy well, and "mon bel amour" instead of "mon belle amour" (the singular form of "amour" is a masculine word so you have to put a masculine adjective).
| a French reader chapter 9 . 11/5/2011
Arg, Bailey is such a bitch! I hate her. I hope she will disappear soon.
| a French reader chapter 8 . 11/5/2011
Wow, I like Fin more and more! Poor little thing
Victoire would say "C'est compris?" (understood) instead of "Comprendre?" (understand), and something like "Et alors?" instead of "Bof". You say "bof" when you don't really care or when you're not interested in something.
| a French reader chapter 5 . 11/5/2011
Hey. Your story is amazing! It's nice to know what happens to the characters of WL. Poor Fin I hope Albus will see how Bailey really is!
There are a few mistakes:
-Victoire would say "bien" instead of "bonne" ("bonne" is a feminine word and you use it in a different situation), and "très bien" instead of "parfaite" (same meaning but in French you don't say you're "parfaite" when someone ask you how you are).
-Her family is "exquise" and not "exquis" (family is a feminine word in French so you have to put a feminine adjective).
-I think you should say "Comme ma maman et mon papa" (as my mummy and my daddy) instead of "Et ma maman et papa".
-In "Mai non!" there is an "s" at the end of "mais". "Qu'est ce que c'est?": I think she would rather say "Pourquoi cela?" (Why that?).
Other than that it was perfect )
I'm sorry if I made any mistake Now I'm going to read the following chapter