Reviews for Deprived |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And then he abandoned it |
![]() ![]() ![]() hope you are able to continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame this is abandoned... I won't lie, reading it again as an adult, the premise and some of the interactions are pretty cringe, but it still holds up as a fun little piece. Would be cool if it was ever finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m guessing this will go nowhere as the story stalled out but you should stop always referring to Fleur as « the 1/4 Veela ». |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story thanks for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lost me with 1st POV. Never do that for any literary work that isn’t an autobiography. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to update this? |
![]() ![]() yeah sorry but im out |
![]() ![]() bruh you aimed this chapter way too high. this was one of the worst first talks i have ever read. not the worst. but definitly second worst. |
![]() ![]() this chapter i realised that maby your actualy trying to redeem the potters |
![]() ![]() the daphne harry thing is an abomination. its litteraly the author using his god power to make them friends lol |
![]() ![]() modys question is so dumb: had harry wanted to take revenge he would have done so already, not waited till he is revealed as harry and a prime suspect if anything happens... duh |
![]() ![]() ah another story with ultra super mega giga powerfull harry who is super ultra mega giga handsome and everybody just loves him id love to know who the author is. the fact that he swaps into "I" when harry is all cool makes me think hes overcompensating for something |
![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ch 14 - reading Ch completed |