Reviews for Deprived
Guest chapter 12 . 8/12
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AquilaCinereo chapter 19 . 8/12
Montague is an idiot. And Lucius should really know better.. I have mixed feelings about Harry/Fleur but I figure this relationsship building is decent, it feels a bit contrieved at parts but still it works with the general characterization. I really enjoy Harrys character while Hate is amazing at some points but sometimes, like the hospital wing after the dragon I suddenly like him a lot less, great character nonetheless. In general though I really like your chracters, they are so human.
As for the plot I love the way you executed the "non boy who lived twin neglected by parents" idea. It is suitably different. Also I am anxiously waiting to see about Voldemort. Is he still behind Harry being a champion? (should be as Moody is apparently acting strange) Did he know Harry was the one to defeat him? Does he in that case still honestly intend to use the resurrection rituel? Does he need to? Is he even still alive? So many questions about something that hasn't even appeared in the story..
I find myself wishing that Harry will be happy and learn to love without losing Hate and most definitely without forgiving his parents. I'm undecided in regards to Adam but I do not wish for a reconsiliation with James or Lily, in my opinion they do not deserve his forgiveness. I'd much rather see Harry make a new family than return to the one he never had. As for the rest of them, Dumbledore, Sirius and so on it would depend mainly on how the story and charcterarcs progress. But I feel like he could not reunite with them if they still want him to reunite with James and Lily.
Not exactly the type of story I usually read I find myself reluctantly intrigued to see where this story will go, and desperately wishing for a prequel once this is complete. So many delicious hints has been left about his past and I truly wish to see what brought him to his meeting with Sebastian Delacour.
storybook thumb chapter 19 . 8/9
Damn one of the best stories ever unfinished
Dirt Rider 712 chapter 18 . 8/8
I really love this story! This is the second time I've read through and I have to say, it's one of the best on here.

Dirt Rider
A fan chapter 19 . 8/7
THIS IS FREAKING AWSOME I love your idea with the whole Hate is a avatar of harrys anger and hate idea I just cant describe how awesome and incredible that idea is to me I have always been a huge fan of the whole emotions are a major factor that can effect magic and loved your explanation of it also i really liked the whole power with a price the greater the power the greater the price thing as I think thats just as important as emotion all in all those factors completely sold me on this fanfiction anyways know that I will continue to read this and check back when i can for chapters also i apologie for my bad grammar and punctuation its hard to do on the device I read and review on keep up the good work and know that there are still people supporting this fic bye
Guest chapter 14 . 8/4
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But a friend chapter 19 . 8/3
good story update soon
BattleshipFusou chapter 17 . 8/1
I keep a long list of quotes that I find inspirational and while I hadn't yet decided upon a review for this story, this chapter told exactly which ones I needed to dig out and share.

"Truth, justice, honor...none of that's worth shit. What matters is people, and people aren't honest or just or honorable. They're petty and they're angry and they're afraid, and all anyone really wants, deep down, is to be wanted. And what's truth compared to that?"

"I like the idea of an undead paladin. He didn't rise because of some dark god or ritual or necromantic power but by four little words. I. Am. Not. Done."
mckertis chapter 19 . 7/30
As WBWL stories go - this one is terrible. Even if it wasnt abandoned - it goes nowhere, but keeps regurgitating same points, over and over and over. A far cry from something like Slytherin Prince.
railmaniac chapter 19 . 7/26
Story is so good I did not even notice nobody ever mentions Voldemort even once
MrPadfoot77 chapter 19 . 7/25
You absolutely MUST update this story! I've re-read it at least a dozen times since your last update, and you've got all of us readers starving for more. I particularly like the character development of Harry over time throughout the chapters, and the Harry/Fleur ship, obviously. Hate has me in literal tears of laughter at some points, while in other scenes he makes us all think about the true meaning of Harry's life. As always, your work is brilliant and we all want more of it, especially on here.

~MrPadfoot77
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24
As a reader of HP fanfics and nothing else genreally I would like to say that this story has personally been one of the best in terms of development and depth. My hope has always been to see a fanfic 'revived' through either inspiration or the author choosing to finish where they left off, and thus it is the same for this piece of work. Once again I am glad for the chance to be able to read this more than 4 times over within the last 3 years as I cycle through each text from various authors that show great proficiency in not just their language but in their works as well, and as a dark!harry fanboy I hope that you the author can find the time to at least update if not post a chapter that explained the intended rest of the story much like another author did when he anandoned his story. The outline and general points of what was to happen next and the overarching isdas would go a long way to put not just my curiosity but as I am sure many other's at rest. Thanks you for taking your time to read this review if you have seen it, and I hope to have a reply-not in the form of words, but rather, hopefully a follow up chapter...? XD anyways I will still hang around with the hopes of seeing this story completed regardless. All the best for you and yours, and may your ventures beyond writing famfictions go as well as this attempt at a hp fanfic have gone!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
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Thunderbird2 chapter 19 . 7/19
It's a shame this was dropped I don't know know the circumstances why it was dropped but it's a shame,I wanted to know what his animagi forms were
sayantan2201 chapter 1 . 7/18
Any chance this will be updated and finished ever?
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