Reviews for Deprived
splax77 chapter 19 . 6/12
And then he abandoned it
invictta chapter 19 . 5/7
hope you are able to continue this
TheZeitgeist chapter 19 . 5/6
Shame this is abandoned... I won't lie, reading it again as an adult, the premise and some of the interactions are pretty cringe, but it still holds up as a fun little piece. Would be cool if it was ever finished.
Vince Carmichael chapter 19 . 4/6
I’m guessing this will go nowhere as the story stalled out but you should stop always referring to Fleur as « the 1/4 Veela ».
1ncarnation chapter 19 . 3/31
Love the story thanks for writing it
LorZod chapter 2 . 3/24
Lost me with 1st POV. Never do that for any literary work that isn’t an autobiography.
TheRealMaxking chapter 19 . 2/25
Are you going to update this?
RK chapter 19 . 2/19
yeah sorry but im out
RK chapter 18 . 2/19
bruh you aimed this chapter way too high. this was one of the worst first talks i have ever read. not the worst. but definitly second worst.
RK chapter 17 . 2/19
this chapter i realised that maby your actualy trying to redeem the potters
RK chapter 14 . 2/19
the daphne harry thing is an abomination. its litteraly the author using his god power to make them friends lol
RK chapter 13 . 2/19
modys question is so dumb:
had harry wanted to take revenge he would have done so already, not waited till he is revealed as harry and a prime suspect if anything happens... duh
RK chapter 5 . 2/19
ah another story with ultra super mega giga powerfull harry who is super ultra mega giga handsome and everybody just loves him
id love to know who the author is. the fact that he swaps into "I" when harry is all cool makes me think hes overcompensating for something
GRACE chapter 19 . 2/14
Please update!
sparksys123 chapter 14 . 1/31
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