Reviews for Jack the Monkey incident in Tortuga
Reviewer chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Overall it's mediocre and it's a good thing that its short because I wouldn't have bothered to finish reading it. The only thing I liked was for you to make Barbossa a father, other than that... meh

PS: The "End Of Line" captured my attention, are you a Tron fan? :)