Reviews for The Vulture
AriesReign chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
That was by far the best NCIS LA fan fic I have read to date. I enjoyed the rising emotion and the many characters used to portray why we love Deeks. I would suggest this read to any fan of NCIS LA. Thanks for the story.
basicnsync chapter 1 . 6/4/2015
Now THAT'S a story!
BobWhite chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Good story!
jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Gruesome! You do love to torture pooor Deeks!

Pete is awesome. Sofia, Carlos and the gang were terrific characters. Deeks had a way of making everyone love him.

And whew! You have created some of the nastiest villains in fiction. Robards was awful, truly awful! All of your bad guys are horrible bastards, but he gave me the shivers.

I know I keep gushing about your stories, but I really am enjoying your work and think you are extraordinarily talented. I guess it's the teacher in me that wants to encourage gifted writers. I hope you have fun writing.
kath46 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
wow i do not know where you get the ideas to write such an amazing story, so emotional and believeable.
PT21 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Wow, what a fantastic tale! I went through the emotional roller coaster ride along with them, and I loved every moment of it. Fantastic story telling.

It's good to have you back with us, Miss Lu :()
tdolphins27 chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
I love all your Deeks stories. You certainly did not dissappoint. Loved it
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
This was awesome. Very well done