AWWWWWWWWWW DATS SO CUTEEEEE

i would loooooove to hire Francis as my personal match maker! :3

sorry to be a grammar nazi (PLZ DONT HATE ON ME FOR SAYING!) but there are a few mistakes in here i hope u will take the time to go back and fix them. it just really peves ppl like me off.(UH IM SO MEAN! WHY CANT I BE A NICE PERSON!) faved

Hi there!
I like the idea behind your fic but your grammar and spelling definitely detracts from the overall effect. You have a lot of floating quotations that have nothing between them, and a few times Arthur's name is missing from the sentence. You should also work on your transition between prose and quotation. One example is 'Alfred grinned. "cause I'm curious!", which goes into Arthur's dialogue. The proper way to write this would be 'Alfred grinned. "'Cause I'm curious!"' and then making Arthur's dialogue the next line down.
You should definitely check into getting a beta for this fic! I think you'd get more positive feedback if it looks like you actually made an effort!

I loved it soooo much~ 3 I hope to read more of your stories! _

YAY! It was so cute, I'm giddy! XD

Love this so much!

Great work!

I love your writing style 3 I was feeling a little down when I read this but it cheered me up D I hope to read more of your work

Heheh I'm giggling like mad, this is so cute! Can't wait for more! Update soon! :D

The story is really well-written. D I hope to read more chapters from this story.